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I know that you haven't written on this site for 10 years now, but your story is really very good. I'd love to see you finish it. More about Sasuke's past after his return, and how they came together as a team again, as well as more on Naruto's pregnancy. I've only recently begun reading on AFF but have found some amazing stories; this is one of them.

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hey i love your story will you be continuing it anytime soon? please....

At first I thought this story was going to be a CRACK fic and as I was in the mood for comedy I started to read. After the first three chapters I quickly realized it wasn't. But it was so good that I was hooked and so I continued to read till the last chapter. It's good and deserves an update. However it looks like it's been over a year since it was updated so I don't hold out much hope. Shame, it's a good story.

ammm... do you have new chapters or you broke up with this story...
I hope to see updates soon!! Like this story a lot!!!

NICE JOB SO FAR!!! now i really have to see the next chapter, huh? ^^ email me whn you update, please? my email's deannathx@comcast.net

In the beginning the characters were a bit ooc for me to be so emotional. I imagined them more pissy than anything else but your latest chaper is the bomb! It shows exactly how it became that way. I understood why Sasuke was so open and understanding and it was because of the mistakes he made as well. What Naruto did was so wrong but now it makes sense why Sasuke forgave him. I thought that was weird before since he's the type of guy to hold gruges but now it feels more natural. Letting me inside Sasuke's head really helps the story seem real.
Reading how Naruto looks down on Sasuke as being weak and stupid was so good to see. And I loved how Sakura and Naruto treated him being back on the team and how Kakashi helped him out on the side. Hmmmm
Even though Naruto has Sasuke's forgiveness I think you should give Naruto a hard time. Cause I haven't forgiven him! lol

I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY...plz dont drop it or anything....Hmmm SOO u better update really soon i have ur story on my fav's just check out my profile....and see that this STORY IS LOVE BY ALL.

This story is really good. I love it. Normally I HATE Mpreg but I tolerate it in this fic cause it actually makes sense unlike the other ones I read where naruto gets pregnate just by anal sex. I mean Its unstandable that the Kyuubi(I think I spelled that wrong) can cause prengnancy but through anal omg it that was possible than chicks should be able to get pregant the sameway too. ya your version makes sense. Naruto turns into a girl then has sex w/sasuke and the Nine Tails allows him to have a child. Great fic. Love it

I know someone probably already said something but baa-chan means Grandma