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for As Long as it Feels OK

by hawkmun

person rAiNwAtEr
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I truly can't wait until you come out with the next chapter. This story has some lovely angst and so truly wonderful romances scenes. I can't wait for Naruto's belly to strat showing. I cried when you described Naruto being able to hear his baby's heart stop. God that was just to sad. I really like this story and hope you stay with it. If you could send me an e-mail when you update I would be deeply greatful.
person raven
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MANN!! I love this story!! It's so cute and uberly awsome!! Keep up the great work and email me when you update onegai!! Thanky!!
person Sakura
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was totally wicked!!!! please you must continue it please please!!!
person Sarisia
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this out of curiosity and continued because I wanted to see what happened to Naruto. Honestly, the idea of males getting pregnant squicks me, but it sorta fits here - even if it did turn a funny story into something very, *very* serious and angsty. Anyway, I'm interested in seeing Naruto and Sasuke finally getting their happy family time and that bastard, Itachi, getting the end that he deserves. Plus, seeing the two love birds developing their relationship is very sweet, though I'm really wondering who Sakura slept with at the party (and I keep thinking Kakashi-sensei - wai!).

I wouldn't mind getting an email when you update this! :D Hope to hear about a new chapter soon!
person luthorlover
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm LOVING THIS!!!!
I hope you're still updating, because I want Sasuke to kill that Rat-Bastard Itachi for the hell he put Naruto through!
And, of course I want more SasuNaru snuggles...
xoxo,
Monica ^__^
person Choi-sama
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww. That last line was so sweet, I'm going comatose. I'm glad those two are finally together. Yay!

PS: I LOVE the way you open chapters. You and I think alike. ^_^
person blisblop
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank Gods!
person yurathewicked
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! YOU ARE GREAT!!! @_@ please keep writing- i think you have a great grasp of the characters. sasuke's getting a little vague though, maybe he could use more "thought time." like , his thoughts about his brother and his new love? anyways, ill def be waiting for the next update!
person Bluesake
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg you need to continue this! Its absolutely amazing!!!!! XD
person AlariaDragonlady
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Keep writing, Hawk, you're doing great.