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for As Long as it Feels OK

by hawkmun

person Bloodyfire
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good, this chapter was kay but im still gonna keep lookin for updates ^_^
person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aawww~!!! That was sooooo sweet!!! ^^ SO glad that you updated -- keep up the good work!!!
person Bloodyfire
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i won't kill you

ill rip you to shreads if you don't update soon, im not a huge fan of mpreg but ive been hooked on this story, and if you suddenly stop well....lets just say kyuubi's wrath will be petty compared to mine *evil smirk*
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O-m-g...thats a great story! I read it all in one night! I couldn't put it down. You need to write more so us yaoi-fan girls can enjoy it ^-^. Keep up the good work!

~Akira~
person Kaiyo No Hime
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff sniff* That was so sweet!

I really needed that, especially after my surge protector blew, and I was afraid my computer was gone, and I wouldn't be able to read the ending of the story!
person Bloodyfire
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one word and thats awsome
person izumi
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
naruto's pregnant, no? why was sasuke punched him in the tummy? is he stupid or something? he could hit him at the back on his neck or something... *me punched sasuke*
person blisblop
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In a boxing match you can knock out a tired opponent with a punch to the gut but its brutal..Naruto is pregnant a better way of knocking him out is pressure points in the neck or cut of the supply of blood to the brain by constricting the jugular.This is interesting but the lack of sex seems very unmasculine,they are gay not girls though I am a female and their is no way in hell I'd watch a movie after making up.No,no,no.Still its interesting.
person wOOt
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cool story :3. I've really enjoyed reading it, so far. Ofcourse, I want to see some good ol' sasu/naru smut action :D. You probably knew that. Uhm, yeah. Apart from the occasional grammar/spelling/logic mistakes, and the weird thing, I liked the grrl!Naruto o_o;; Which was weirdddd... *ish a boy, who doesnt like grrlbits* but still, as it was naruto, that was cool. I actually haven't seen the anime/manga past the first thirty episodes or so, so I cant comment on the storylineness.

Overall, a very entertaining read, and something I will wanna see more (smut) of.
person raptree
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic is awsome but please review soon i cant wait to find out what happens next to naruto-kun.