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err... is sasuke supposed to hit naruto in the gut while the later has a baby (furthermore, his baby)? i mean, even a jab on the head should be safer, right?

Gah! You better continue writting this is getting really good you can't stop now! Man poor Naruto. So Itachi knows about the Baby? Oh boy. What about Sasuke if he didn't wan't to kill Itachi before he's going to want to torte him to then then revive him than kill him all over again. ^_^ Isn't that a lovely thought? This is the lowest point? Yay that means Naruto's going to be on the road to recovery, its goona have bumps, pot holes, and detour signs all over it isn't it? Does Kuuybi in your story care for Naruto, and I mean in more that 'If he dies I die' way? What about Tsunade(sp?), Kikeshi, Iruka, Neji, Gaara and everybody else? Oi is Kiba foinf to be like a replacement Uncle since Naruto and Kiba are such good friends? Will the Kuuybi have any effects of the child like it will be stronger and stuff. Or will the baby just be a vesle for Kuuybi to be reborn in. Kinda like Kurama from Yu Yu Hakushow I mean. ^_^ Kya! I can't wait till your next update I'll be waiting for it! Love the story so far very creative and you write so well! When I read the story I get mental pictures of whats happening and sometimes I forget I'm reading and actually think I saw this in an episode! Jeez I have an active imagintation. Oi hurry and finish the next chap please? I wana see what you have planned next >.< Ja ne till next chap!

I just read all the chapters you have up so far and I must say that I am going to try to wait patiently for the next chapter. Just thinking about being stuck in Itachi's world and being tortured over and over is enough to make me crack. Naruto has actually been rescued right? This isn't a trick right? And why did Sasuke have to kick him in the gut to knock him out...Naruto's pregnant (LOL!). Very good story, keep up the good work.

This is a wonderful story!!! I hope you keep posting more updates on it soon.... @_@ WHY DID SASUKE PUNCH NARUTO?!!!!?? you must continue!!

wpouldn't the punch to the gut Sasuke used to knock Naruto out kill or endanger the life of the baby, other than that your story is really interesting, peace out M.C.K.F.

Thanks so much for letting me know that you'd updated -- I appreciate it! ^^ Very good chapter, even if it wasn't the "most fun" to read, lol. I look forward to finding out how Sasuke repairs the damage Naru-kun has suffered -- keep up the good work!!

OMG!!! *tries not to cry* POOR NARU-KUN!!! *sniffle* Hurry and update!!

Oh, and I would like to be added to your list of update-emails!! dragonladyaly underscore chan at hotmail dot com.

DAMN YOU ITACHI!!!!!! Poor Naruto...all the pain...all the suffering. All the horriable things that happened to him. As if he hasn't been tortured enough by the villiagers. :( Please update as soon as you can, I really want to see how Sasuke and Naruto handle the recent situations.

I'm a bit confused...has it been a couple weeks as they tortured him..man would seem that its been close to a couple years..unless it was a couple years into the future to begin with?...Can someone help me out here?Anyway...if Naruto kept coming back to life then did the baby also...or did the baby die at all? and then the question of the future or present tense comes back into play...even if he kept dying as did the baby then the baby would continue to grow.As would Naruto....So do ya mind clearing things up for me Hawk? Oh and awsome yet confusiing chapter!

Suck a great story! I can't wait until the next update!

Please tell me when you update!