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for As Long as it Feels OK

by hawkmun

person Arryelle
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome. I loved it, it's getting all juicy now full of surpises and stuff can't wait for the next chappie

Arry
person Arryelle
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HE'S PREGANT YOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ARRY
again
person Youko Hime
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic!!definately deserves more reviews^^
keep up the good work^_~
person Yami Jay
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel trouble in paradise, unless Sasuke is in love with Naruto in reality.
person vampchic
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wonder what Sasuke's reaction will be when Naruto tells him. really cant wait for that chapter.
should be interesting. and how will the rest of the village react when Naruto can no longer hide his condition?
are you going to have the girls, Ino, Sakura and Hinata, throw a baby shower for Naruto?? that would be cute.
but mostly i want to find out Sasuke's reaction when he learns that he is the father of Naruto's baby.
update soon! me sooo want to read more!
person akuma_river
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter, Hawk.

about a beta, I offered once a long time ago, and it ended badly.

So if I offer, and since we know each other, it might work out ok.

So you wanna try?

Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
person Jadejj
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
snicker snicker snicker oh boy Naruto is in deep trouble now :P
person kai
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe, naruto's preggers!! update soon, i can't wait to see what happens!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! *gives you chocolates* ^^ This is getting really interesting -- I can't wait to find out how Sasuke reacts to the news!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work, and (as always) update ASAP, k? Ja ne!!!
person Setsu
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooo This is so cool. I've read alot Naruto gets pregnent by Sasuke fics ^.^ but so far this is the best one where its most believeble how he became pregnant. Is Naruto going to tell him? Will Neji find out that Naruto is pregenent? Will all his friends eventually find out and help Narutuo through his pregnency? What about Itachi? will he find out about Sasuke and Naruto's unborn child and try to use them? Or Orochimaru?...or his he already dead? Wow I love how its progresing its not moving to fast or slow and the length of the chapters are good, though more is always goos ;). Heh heh How will Naruto deal with the pregnency? He can't use the Nine-Tails Chakra but can he still use his own and fremorm normal jutsu? What about his missions and training? With out them he'll probably go nuts. And How will Sasuke handle being a dady AND finding out he slept with Naruto? Will he belive him or will Tsunade...Oi whats Tsunade going to do with a pregnent Naruto? Why was Akasuki(sp?) going after murchant wagons near Sand? And is Gaara going to find out about Naruto? That should be a fun encounter heh heh. Oh and will Naruto have to have a C-section? WooHoo I'm looking forward to the 9 months ^.^ I am SO Hopeing this is going to be long story you explaine everything well and give good descriptions and visual images when reading the story. Good luck with the rest of the story and Great Job! Ja!