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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm... the solo was good. liked the solo.
so sasuke does want to get close to the blond. but does he want to get close to naruto the way that naruto wants??
and too bad naruto wasnt paired with sasuke, but then again, naruto probably wouldn't of paid much attention to want he should of been doing.XD
cant wait to read more. update soon!!
so sasuke does want to get close to the blond. but does he want to get close to naruto the way that naruto wants??
and too bad naruto wasnt paired with sasuke, but then again, naruto probably wouldn't of paid much attention to want he should of been doing.XD
cant wait to read more. update soon!!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting going so far. and i do wonder how sasuke will handle the issue of who naruko is whenever it comes up. up date soon. ^_^
this part in this chapter here, "Temari with Rock Lee to combine their range and taijutsu. Which leaves Sasuke with Temari.”, one of the temari's is suppose to be tenten, right? probably sasuke paired up with tenten?
this part in this chapter here, "Temari with Rock Lee to combine their range and taijutsu. Which leaves Sasuke with Temari.”, one of the temari's is suppose to be tenten, right? probably sasuke paired up with tenten?
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hawk this chapter is great. I didn't see any big mistakes if any at all.
So what's going to happen next?
Poor Naruto, he fell in love with Sasuke. What about Sasuke's part?
Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
So what's going to happen next?
Poor Naruto, he fell in love with Sasuke. What about Sasuke's part?
Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more please !! it's so good ^^
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update -- this is getting more and more interesting with each chapter you post!!! (duh... XP Hey, I'm tired, what can I say?) I can't wait to find out what happens between Sasuke and Naruto -- are there going to be some "symptoms" anytime soon? ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!!!! MUST READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting transition chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Just one point: one typo, Akatsuke --> Akatsuki.
Just one point: one typo, Akatsuke --> Akatsuki.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ Thanks for updating!!!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How Kawaii! Loved Sasuke's whole discourse on Naruko. He's being a bit dense though. And Kakashi obliviously knows something.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That's one pretty interesting read you have there, Hawk-san. I'm not really interested in yaoi or MxM pairing's (*gasp* I know... for shame!! heh. ) but every now and again, I do search the the yaoi, and shonen-ai and male pairings-based stories to see if there are any good reads, and I must say, yours' is one of the more well written ones out there. So keep up the good work, can't wait to see more from you!! I do have to admit though, a little shonen-ai or yaoi, when tastefully done, as you seem more than capable of doing, never hurt anyone....
That Naruko is one hot smutty babe though ne? *grin* ( Poor Sasuke, never stood a chance did he? ^____~ )
That Naruko is one hot smutty babe though ne? *grin* ( Poor Sasuke, never stood a chance did he? ^____~ )