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for As Long as it Feels OK

by hawkmun

person Swarmi
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it would be jutsu, not jitsu.
person Swarmi
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i thought you could have made it more wonton... yo, sex and more sex
person kai
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, we need the action!! hehehe, naruko!! I'm really enjoying this fic, it's getting interesting. update soon!!
person vampchic
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes you are crule to leave it there, but at the same time i am glade. i perfer naruto male. at least when it comes to being with sasuke.
kind of wished that there was a little more kiba and naruto action too, but oh well. you are the writer.
also i loved what you did with sakura. i would so love to hear her reaction to find that she was with the wrong 'sasuke'.XD sakura bashing is fun!!!
cant wait for the next update. make it soon!! me want to read more!
person bhodi li
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! a pregnancy one??? dang....want more want more! needs to be a little longer =)
person chem chick
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I really like your story so far! It looks like it has a lot of promise as far as where the story is going. Can't wait to read more!
person yoroshiku
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeps!!! i am blushing!!! who knew that Sasuke could be insecure? what happens when he finds out she is Naru-chan? will he screw his lights out? i wanna read more!!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! *gives you chocolates* ^___^ I can't wait to find out how Sasuke reacts when he find's out that it's really Naruto......or that "Naru-chan" is pregnant, for that matter!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!
person Hinata-chan
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kunoichi - female ninja
Kyuubi - the literal translation is "9 tails" so its not a name of the fox with 9 tails, they just call him nine tails since he has 9 tails. and naruto usually reverts to calling him 'aho kitsune' lol.
*Gonna read ch.2 now*
person Sukara
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cruel-ness....;-; *Sibbles(Sniffles)* why...;-; I'll add it to my favourites ofr now...but if I get to a point where I'm gonna cry while I'm reading your fanfic I'm gonna take it off my favourites >.< i just don't..like crying..Never cried in a long time...so I'll get a headache if I do cry >.<