rate_review Reviews

This is one of the best mpreg stories I've come by! Please let me know when you update!

I think you have a marvolous story, i'm sorry no one is reviewing~! i know exactly how that feels!!
Your plot is one of the best i've read in a VERY long time, and it is extreamly refreshing. Almost like a hot shower after a long day at work.
I like the way you give background as to why the characters are going to be making their choices to the challenges that happen upon them.
Thank You for writing this wonderful piece of Art, and i hope you continue to write and finish it. I can't wait to read more.

-- kaiki

that was great!!!!!!!!!!!! please let me know when you release another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just want to tell you that I love this story and would really like to be added to your update list. I hope your writing is going well and you are getting ready to update. I look forward to it. In case my email doesn't show up it is zhem1x5@yahoo.com. Thanks.

i love this story ^^ its so cute and i love it! please write more! i only just started reading it but i promise to review faithfully if you'll update on a regular basis.^^

Nya, stumbled on your story by chance, and am extremely interested. You're diving deeper into both sides metal states than normally found, and it's keeping me in my seat far past the time I should normally be up (just read the whole thing, or what you have posted anyway, in one sitting). Anyway, I just wanted to say that this is really well done and I can't wait to read more. Hope you update soon!

Sachie

You have no idea how much I love where this is going. I just need you to finish!!!! If you have an idea, stick with it, because its obviously working.

I am really enjoying your story. Please add me to your mailing list so I know when you have updated. I wish that I could give you the constructive critisim that you asked for but unfortunately I am not much of a writer so I don't have anything to say. I would like to see how Sasuke and Naruto's friendship came back though, since these two chapters have shown Naruto treating their friendship as over. Maybe do a scene from the past in Naruto's POV? Let us see what he thinks? Is it "tough love" or payback? Thanks, please let me known when you update!

I don't know if my email shows up where you can see it so I thought I'd beter give it here if I want to be added to the list: secobb at email dot arizona dot edu, thanks!

What an interesting story! Update soon, ne? :)