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Really wonderful. I love the characterizations and the way the relationship is working itself out...I worry about Naruto's emotionless-ness and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love you. Seriously. This fic is one of the best Naruto fics I've read so far (not many yet, but I'm working on it). Do you have spell-check/grammar-check on your computer? If not, I think there's one on google.com somewhere. The only thing I can find wrong with this story is the spelling/grammatical errors. Other than that, I find it creative, original, and not too terribly blown out of proportion. You kept the characters as close to their actual character's personality as possible, whilst still justifying the subtle and not-so-subtle differences in your story. I hope to read more, and if you would: please add me to your, undoubtedly, growing list for updates as aff doesn't have them? In case my email doesn't show up, it's sakura underscore laurel 6 6 6 at yahoo dot com. Thanks again for the awesome read!

I like minna ^^(really love)
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I loved this fic, please do continue it - you're past 200 reviews now, as you hoped for. I don't like the flashbacks in the last 2 chapters, not really sure why. Probably just lack of fluff. I don't really understand the random asterisks in chapter 15, I assume they're to show Naruto's mental instability, but I don't particularly like that as a technique. As I said, I love this fic, I don't mean to be harsh. Most people are very reluctant to give criticism even if it is constructive, so I thought I'd give my 2 cents. Skyrail.

As you now know, I have sent you a buddy request for msn! ^^ Please say yes! Granted I'll soon be hitting the hundred mark (okay not really) in buddies but you have to add me!!!!!!!! I absolutely am addicted to your story! Don't ask... I'm a complicated (okay just weird...) person... But seriously, just something about your fic... it's just so plausable ( I think that's the word). What I'm trying to say is that it makes sense. It's not just another "we seemingly hate each other but let's do the nasty anyway"! I mean not to many people can pull off the whole m-preg scenario. It's usually a big hurdle to overcome. GAH! But I must go now! Onto being nagged! TTFN!

ARGH!! why would you end it there!??! i'm so sad... no fa-air!!(whining) i'm leaving sunday! no contact! for THREE WEEKS!! how could you...*sniffles* oh well!^.^ i really love this story, but i have been noticing major mistakes. you keep using 'then' when you mean 'than'. like, you say 'rather then', but it should be 'rather than'. i had an example from the story, but can't find it now... but you've got talent and i really do love this story. i would appreciate emails on updates, you would, pretty please????? thanks!^^~

*sighs* okay, the stupid thing hid my e-mail, so here it is: authress16@yahoo.com
please send me a notice when you update!! i love this!!~

One of the best fanfiction I have ever read! Please write more!!

Just finished reading the entire story, and I must say, WOW! This is one of the most well written and interesting fics I have read. Sasuke and Naruto, sweetest yaoi couple ever. What's more, they are expecting a baby, I love Mpregs!! Keep up the great work, please, continue soon, this story is AMAZING!

this is good. really really good. though i had to skip ch 14 i think it was due to the torture of the baby,... well i guess nothing else could be expected since i myself am 6 months pregnant. This is very interesting disregarding that little chapter and i can't wait to read more.