rate_review Reviews

what can I say? I read the first and got addicted, and just spent an hour reading all of them. this stuff is great, and so close to the actual characters, other than the half assed stuff I see more and more these days. your a brilliant writer. <3

Oh mi gawd! I read the entire series none stop, it was getting so late that i had to finish it now. Wow, just...wow. It's amazing. This is the best story i've ever read. Hurry up and write the next chapter!

YAY this story is awesome. UPDATE. XD its really good

Wow...ok, so here I go. I've read a TON os SasuNaru (maybe too much, but it is my OTP, so yeah) and i've even read a couple of Mpregs - which was short lived since the whole idea just isn't for me, which is why I never gave this story a glance past the summary.

BUT...

I really regret that now, since after finally getting over my inhibitions, I discovered that this here is one hell of a story!! It's sweet, cute, and is making me fall in love with this pairing all over again. You've made Naruto's pregnancy seem real and genuine, while keeping him in character through it all. I love the pace you're going at, not rushing in to anything but not dragging it along either. Showing what happened between the two after Sasuke's return is much appreciated, since it makes the reasoning behind Sasuke's actions that much clearer. I'm wondering, is that package of clothes from Naruto..? I bet it is, hehe, that's so cute! I'm excited about them living together, since I know that's gonna force them to get closer. I'm glad Naruto has recovered from Itachi's torture (which was heartbreaking!!) but I know that he's gonna come back eventually, I just hope it's far off from happening...like really, really far off. My boys deserve to be happy for at least a little while, ne?

Well, I look forward to reading the next chapter. Take your time and keep kicking ass ^_^

i read all of your chapters and let me tell you something it is so damn good e-mail me when you post the new chapter please

I really, really, really, really like this story! ^_^
I'm not sure if I have to be a member or not to be added to the up-date list, but, either way,
could you just drop me a line when you get a new chapter? If that's too much to ask though,
that's okay, I'll just check back now and then on my own. ^_^

And, um, just an itsy bitsy bit of advice (I know nobody likes perfectionists but, XD),
perhaps you should be just a tad more watchful of word errors?
Like, I noticed in another chapter there was a part that said
"The paint was so intense" or something like that. It made me crack a smile for a moment
at the randomness of it but, lol.

Nice insight on the flash backs, especially on the actions and emotions of the characters with in the years following sasuke's return. ^_^ very nice plot line..i started to read your storie b-4 until AFF when and change everything..love love on the storie..-U-luck on the next chappie..

great story!!!! I would love to see more updates soon! The new arc explaining sasuke's side of the story is a real nice change of pace. please keep up the wonderful work! hope to read more soon!!!!

Baa-chan means "gradma" Baa-baa means "old hag"

I really like what you've done with this story (too bad AFF doens't seem to have any sort of an alert feature for updates) but I really like how this is working. It may be in a rather overly done genre of naruto, BUT ... and here is the important part .. you do it well. I really am looking forward to updates on this.