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*gives all the reviews* Ok. Reviewed....^^ Are you going to post more? Tis so good! The chars are like real people, with a little and understandable OOC....but not much. And so very fluffy and cute! ^^ I alos love you're writing style, clean crisp and very easy to understand. So pleaaseeeeeeeeeee write more? Cause I want to know what happens too! ^___^
~Mally~

Awe.

OMG! I just found this fanfiction a few days ago and I couldn't stop reading until I finished!!
I love it! =^.^=
And now it seem there will be some "home comedy" at the uchiha mansion yay!
I wonder, with all the ramen naruto usually eats... what'll happen when he gets cravings? ;)

Update pleasenessnesse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I beg you!!!!!!!!!! I really want to know what happends!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster^^

Awww...:D This fic has been so cute! I luff all the fluff <33 Continue soon!

This may be my first time reviewing on AFF. This is a great story, and I hope that you continue until the end. Everyone seems to be in character, and while there was torture, there wasn't any "this is the apocolypse" or "I have nothing, not even a soul" or anything along those lines. Thanks! ^_^ sincerely, anonymous

NOO!!! How can you end it soo!!! I love your story and I'm so happy you posed again. Keep it up! What well he say? Well he go into denial? Hm... or become very overprotective... I see the Uchiha clan as possesive people...because well....their symbol is on...everything ^-^!

~Akira~

Love, your fic! I found it tonight and began reading. I've been on AFF.net for awhile reading a lot of stories and yours is the first I've gotten the courage to actually review. (Has it ever occurred to authors that most people don't review, even though the fic was great, that people like me don't know how to review?) ANyways, heh, here goes. So far, I love the plot. I've read a billion diferent nausasu or other pairings from Naruto, and yours stood out as unique. I like your take on Naruto and Sasuke. I have no problem with the writing style as I'm pretty open minded about that and how people write. I can read just about anything. That's not to say that your grammar is bad. It's good and the story flows really well.
There was a point though, and I can't remember if it was in this chapter or chapter fifteen, but from the mental torture, I thought perhaps Naruto would be a bit more damaged than he was. I mean, it seems like he got over it pretty quickly, with only a few words exchanged between him and Sasuke. One thing that did bother me was the asterisks around certain words like: he *was* happy. I'm not sure why you did that or maybe it's just the formatting and it didn't turn out right. Oh, well. I hope this spurs you to write faster :smile: And, I'd like to get an e-mail to know when you have updated. Thanks and keep writing!

Hmm I was happy to see another chapter up but, why would Sasuke feel uneasy about taking care of Naruto, especially after spending the night? I guess I'll just have to wait and see n_n great job otherwise.

Wow. I'd totally forgotten about this story until I saw the update today. I'm glad a new chapter was up. I'm anxious to see how it all comes together. I'd love to be added to your 'notify/update' list, if you don't mind adding me.