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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thou art evil...for you create readable crack! My whole day's been runnin' late b/c I keep comin' back for more.
I have no complaints, and will wait rather (im)patiently for updates.
I have no complaints, and will wait rather (im)patiently for updates.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I just got done with Teamwork and jumped into the sequel. I love your style of writing and have read all of your Gundam Wing fics. Your totally awsome!!!
P.S. Is Garou ever going to be continued? I love that story.
P.S. Is Garou ever going to be continued? I love that story.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to finish this! You have me hooked...don't leave me lingering!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, like I said I'm back to post a better review.
I was going through the earlier posts that people typed and I really didn't like a certain one.
I think it's funny how people read stuff they don't like. They read it and then bitch about it. Then they keep reading it and bitch more. It's like WTF no one cares what you have to say. Especially if the reasons you have are crap. It's not like these characters are real.
It's fanfiction, artists take an idea and put alil twist on it, when it comes to writing a fanfiction. That's pretty much the point. You are the creator, you get to pick and choose what you like and want to change. It's not like they claim that the stories is theirs. (geez)
I believe the creator (of any anime) is the only person who should be anal about the way the character's personalities should be. But, I'm sure that the creator of Naruto doesn't go around reading people's fanfiction and saying "This, This and THIS is wrong! Fix it!" Ugh, some people really need to get over it. It's a story, fanFICTION!!!
If you don't like what your reading scroll down and click the purple font that says "Go Elsewhere" and find something you do like and know you wont bitch about. Geez talk about common sense.
ANYWAY...
I really do enjoy your writing, it's fun and creative. The jokes you put in there crack me up. LOL :D
You made me like Sasuke again. ~_^
I can't wait for your next post. I hope it's soon.
Thanks for the great read.
I was going through the earlier posts that people typed and I really didn't like a certain one.
I think it's funny how people read stuff they don't like. They read it and then bitch about it. Then they keep reading it and bitch more. It's like WTF no one cares what you have to say. Especially if the reasons you have are crap. It's not like these characters are real.
It's fanfiction, artists take an idea and put alil twist on it, when it comes to writing a fanfiction. That's pretty much the point. You are the creator, you get to pick and choose what you like and want to change. It's not like they claim that the stories is theirs. (geez)
I believe the creator (of any anime) is the only person who should be anal about the way the character's personalities should be. But, I'm sure that the creator of Naruto doesn't go around reading people's fanfiction and saying "This, This and THIS is wrong! Fix it!" Ugh, some people really need to get over it. It's a story, fanFICTION!!!
If you don't like what your reading scroll down and click the purple font that says "Go Elsewhere" and find something you do like and know you wont bitch about. Geez talk about common sense.
ANYWAY...
I really do enjoy your writing, it's fun and creative. The jokes you put in there crack me up. LOL :D
You made me like Sasuke again. ~_^
I can't wait for your next post. I hope it's soon.
Thanks for the great read.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfic. It's cute.
I seriously can't wait for the update!!!
I seriously can't wait for the update!!!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"I dare hope he won't be that sugary."
Yeah. Right. I hope so, too.
Actually, I don't particularly like this sequel. Maybe it's because I am not into heterosexual anime fanfiction, and I don't really like Sakura... and, ungh, when you compared her to Sasuke (fighting her reminds Naruto of Sasuke), I really wanted to vomit. Because it's just ridiculous. There is no way Sakura would match Sasuke or Naruto. Yeah, I agree, she's not totally lame, but matching an Uchiha or the Kyuubi... ungh, I really want to vomit again. In my own eyes, it really degrades the boys. I am sorry if it offends you, but that's why reviews are, eh? To share an opinion.
Besides, I don't really understand the Kyuubi. Is he obsessed with Sasuke? Does he even... uh, "like" Sakura? Or does he treat her like she's a... um, "The-mother-of-his-cubs"? And if Sasuke is that cool and powerful, HOW can you still say that his strength equals to Sakura's? Yack. Besides, this thing is way too Sakura-centered... and Naruto is too annoying. Actually, the fic doesn't seem to be NaruSasuSaku anymore. It's more like NaruSaku (eeek), and a little bit of SasuSaku *vomits*... uh. Um. I feel really sick. +____+ Okay. I DO like the universe and the characterization is nice. And I really like the way you write... well, I am really not into het anime fics. And you seem to transform the story into het. It's not like I am demanding you to write fluffy NaruSasu scenes... it's just that, Kyuubi in the Fox Play sequel (or Naruto as well, in the original Teamwork) seemed to actually care about Sasuke and treat Sakura the way I would treat her if I were him. ^^' I mean, Naruto, especially in the last chapter, treats Sakura as a loving sappy idiot and treats Sasuke like he's furniture or something. And I wonder... maybe you are going Mary Sue on this fic? ^^' Well, regardless, I still hope you will update. Eventually.
Yeah. Right. I hope so, too.
Actually, I don't particularly like this sequel. Maybe it's because I am not into heterosexual anime fanfiction, and I don't really like Sakura... and, ungh, when you compared her to Sasuke (fighting her reminds Naruto of Sasuke), I really wanted to vomit. Because it's just ridiculous. There is no way Sakura would match Sasuke or Naruto. Yeah, I agree, she's not totally lame, but matching an Uchiha or the Kyuubi... ungh, I really want to vomit again. In my own eyes, it really degrades the boys. I am sorry if it offends you, but that's why reviews are, eh? To share an opinion.
Besides, I don't really understand the Kyuubi. Is he obsessed with Sasuke? Does he even... uh, "like" Sakura? Or does he treat her like she's a... um, "The-mother-of-his-cubs"? And if Sasuke is that cool and powerful, HOW can you still say that his strength equals to Sakura's? Yack. Besides, this thing is way too Sakura-centered... and Naruto is too annoying. Actually, the fic doesn't seem to be NaruSasuSaku anymore. It's more like NaruSaku (eeek), and a little bit of SasuSaku *vomits*... uh. Um. I feel really sick. +____+ Okay. I DO like the universe and the characterization is nice. And I really like the way you write... well, I am really not into het anime fics. And you seem to transform the story into het. It's not like I am demanding you to write fluffy NaruSasu scenes... it's just that, Kyuubi in the Fox Play sequel (or Naruto as well, in the original Teamwork) seemed to actually care about Sasuke and treat Sakura the way I would treat her if I were him. ^^' I mean, Naruto, especially in the last chapter, treats Sakura as a loving sappy idiot and treats Sasuke like he's furniture or something. And I wonder... maybe you are going Mary Sue on this fic? ^^' Well, regardless, I still hope you will update. Eventually.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t! update! [ i wuv joo diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis much! ]
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright!
Sakura's dad is kool. *thumbs up*
I just kept thinking, don't be like sakura's mom, don't be like sakura's mom, etc, etc.
You can allways count on your daddy. X3
Anyway, this chapter is an awesome installment. I give you cookies.
Sakura's dad is kool. *thumbs up*
I just kept thinking, don't be like sakura's mom, don't be like sakura's mom, etc, etc.
You can allways count on your daddy. X3
Anyway, this chapter is an awesome installment. I give you cookies.
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE! sorry to sound redundent.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cann't resist the urge to gush. I never read a threesome fic until I came upon your series and I have absolutely fallen in love. Your careful character portrail and painfully detailed dynamics have convinced me that this is perhaps the greatest pairing in the Naruto universe. I would also like to admit that I am in general very timid about m/m pairings, not a fan to say the least, but you have done a great job at making Naruto and Sasuke's relationship seem plausible and not-scary (and yes I have read the lemons too). I love the continued angst and lack of complete resolution within any one chapter and love that I can trust as an author to be intelligent enough to eventually resolve them all (something I can not say about a great many fan fic authors). I would also like to thank as a Sakura fan for not making her too pathetically weak or too ridiculously strong, two popular ways of destroying the beauty of her character I believe. I always wait with baited breath for your updates. You have an amazing talent for writing with these characters and I stand in awe of your imagination and literary art. You are flat out incredible and I hope you never lose the love and joy of writing these wonderful little stories for silly people like me to read.