rate_review Reviews

This is such a wonderfully written story. The situations and characters are believable. Keep up the wonderful work!

You updated! *happy jump*

I love the wacky Yamanaka family, and Sakura's dad was a very believable character, nice job with him! And how you made Sasuke and Naruto's relationship a believable, realistic male/male. I like the direction this is moving in. You are doing a great job with the plot! I can't wait to see how the dinner with Sakura's parents goes, and the progression of the difficult pregnancy and what's going to happen next. Teamwork conquers all!

*thirty cheers for Asuka-sama!*

First of all I want to say forget all the anal retentive ass-wipes who keep pissing you off. Writing a three-way relationship fic (I mean rellationship not just a one night or fuck buddie type thing) is DAMN HARD TO WRITE. It rarely works in real life so writing is no easier and I applaude you for the great work you've done so far. I'm more of a Naruto/Sakura fan, but then I read this and now have a taste for decent Sakura/Sasuke fics because of this, you're a really talented writer. Yes everyone is a bit more grown up but I think they're all very much in character, Sakura is insecure in many things (the whole reason why she trained her ass off after Sasuke left in the manga), Naruto likes to make things casual and just goes with the flow, and Sasuke is hell a hard to write, he is a really complex character but I think you did a damn good job with him even though he is difficult. I seriously love this fic (I just recently stumbled upon it and was happy when two days later I found an update), it's well written and fun but serious when it needs to be. I also liked in the last chapter or two how you brought out Sakura and Ino's odd friendship that helps give sakura support...in its own odd way ^^() Though I wonder how Naruto and Sasuke may take the news about 1) Sakura's father wanting to meet them and 2) Recent news about the pregnancy, those things are definitly floating around my mind. That and maybe eventually (right now the story actually has me more hooked them the prospects of physical ativities) have a repeat of that night that started it all. Anyway I felt the need to tell you how much I appreciate your writing since so many people who are extremely anal retentive about detail keep seeming to bum you out. Screw all of em, if they dont like it dont read, keep up the great writing!

I am really enjoying this series!! I love what you have done with the characters, even though Naruto is still being treated unfairly.:)
I also liked your foxplay side story...are there any sequels in the works?
All in all I like reading this...please continue and don't let others distract or discourage you. It's all fanfiction anyway.

YAY!! For the longest time I thought this story had died. Now I can read happily again. And a great rant at the start. Screw all those people who give ya shit.

*is exstatic that you updated* Yippeeeeeee!!! ^^;; Absolutely smashing chapter, my dear! Positively wonderful!!! I had actually been thinking about this fic a couple of weeks ago, and wondered when you were going to update, so you just made my day!!! ^___~ I really do love this fic -- I'm not a big fan of Sakura, but you have done a wonderful job portraying her in this, so I actually enjoyed "her" chapter (chapters, if you include Teamwork) quite a bit. Also, your characterizations of the boys are excellent as well, and your descriptions, too. ^^ Okay, I'm babbling. Keep up the good work, and update as soon as you can, k? Oh, and I completely agree with what you said in your "rant" -- I hope that whoever it is who is making those comments gives you a break, as well as the peple who write simple-minded complaints w/out backing them up, lol. That can be quite annoying, ne? ^___~ Ja!

*just realized that she probably reviewed your story on MediaMiner rather than on AFF.net* Heh... sorry 'bout that............ ^^;; Well, now you'll have my reviews at both sites, lol. Ja ne!!!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!, FINALLY!! this is the story i like the best, believe me!! love love love narusakusasu, the way YOU put it, not like a love triangle... and i loved this chapter... please keep going!

YEEEEY THAT WAS GREAT. please update more often, your one of the best out there yet we rarely hear from you. I dont think you need to change or think to hard about anything that others say about your work. Probably cause i think its perfect the way it is. Keep up the good work. And do it how you like it, which is the way your already doing it, im assuming. Keep up the good work and update soon.

TaTa

Ah. So good. Where to begin. Hm.. I never got a chance to review Teamwork, or any of the other sidestories, etc. but they are all great, as is the sequel. I have to say that I find so many parts of this unbearably (okay not true) cute, and others extremely sexy. Great job on that, mate. Well I had lots more praise but I have realized that I'm not sure exactly how to say it without sounding like (more of) a prat. So keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more of Teamwork 2!