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for Teamwork 2

by Askerian

person Anon
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FREAKIN UPDATE!!!! Mkkkkk? lol
Love your story...
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FREAKIN UPDATE!!!! Mkkkkk? lol
Love your story...
person Tenacious D
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, no updates in forever, please dont let this story die an earyl death!!!!
person 123
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, more teamwork goodness!!

Honestly, I had every intention of writing a nice long (but probably pointless) review but my mind is empty at the moment...no surprise there. Anywho, I enjoy the cuddly parts the trio share, and cookies for you if you put in more. Your spelling and grammar are great as usual, and so I have nothing to rant about. Shock. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter! And the big reveal of who the father is (from your personality comment, I think it will be Naruto. He needs some loving anyway)!
person Anon
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YA-AY! You updated! Kepep it coming keep it coming.
person hogo-chan
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! it was so cute! I can't wait for the next update! ^_^
person Chelsey
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice very nice!! May you update soon! I do so love the jokes and the funny. I had a really hard day at work so your fic cheered me right up!
Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person TobiasX
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to get another chapter to read. Great stuff, keep going! :)
person Rikku
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this series. Please continue with it, I'm eager to see who's baby it is and how they will function living together.
person Anon
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, I didn't realize it was still in progress. Now I'm sad. please continue soon...