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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story, funny too. i like the way u kept everyone in character... gr8 job....can't wait for the update... so plz update soon....cheers ^_^
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so cute! great job!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to read more of this story...
I like the angst in the whole thing... very well written story..
Keep the spirit up.
I like the angst in the whole thing... very well written story..
Keep the spirit up.
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cuuute ^_^ I get the inkling that Naruto is more naturally attracted to Sakura, Sakura is more natrually attracted to Sasuke, and Sasuke is more naturally attracted to Naruto. Not that Naruto isn't nec. attracted to Sasuke, Sakura to Naruto, and so forth... it's just that there are little hints throughout the series, ya know? Or is that completely irrelevent to the story & I'm just seeing things? Or even totally ass backwards? Anyway, great job! Loved the Sasuke-Naruto banter "drip paint and die" LoL. Ino was amusing too. Update soon!!!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter!! they seem so great together and I like how you let it progress slowly and all^^ please updte as soon as you can^^
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Please continue with it
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know i can just see the birth:
Naruto: It's okay Sakura just breath and push *looks extremly nervous but excited*
*Sakura latches onto Sasukes and Narotos hands and squeezes with all her might*
Sakura: (Inner Sakura coming out) When this fucking *pant* baby is born I'm *pant* casterating the *pant* both of you
The two males pale.
Well it could go something like that, but I can see Naruto being encouraging and Sasuke just standing uncomfortably
Anywayz update soon
Naruto: It's okay Sakura just breath and push *looks extremly nervous but excited*
*Sakura latches onto Sasukes and Narotos hands and squeezes with all her might*
Sakura: (Inner Sakura coming out) When this fucking *pant* baby is born I'm *pant* casterating the *pant* both of you
The two males pale.
Well it could go something like that, but I can see Naruto being encouraging and Sasuke just standing uncomfortably
Anywayz update soon
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Great start to part 2! Ino's hysterical. =D
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XDD okay, I read your first story and I loved it and now, althought its just the first chapter, I love this sequel too^^ update soon
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome! I'm so happy you're making a sequel! I loved the origional Teamwork! this is gonna be so great! And the first chapter was wonderful! Keep up the good work!