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by Askerian

person Caspian
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just thought that I should take this moment to declare my passionate love for you. Normally I’m a yaoi/yuri only kind of girl, but I’ve got a soft-spot for Team 7 threesomes. It just works, y’know? You’ve captured it perfectly. I love your Sakura – she’s as familiar as if she’d lived in my skin. Sasuke is deliciously bitchy and confident and insecure, and your Naruto is pure sun. As for you being French… Damn. Your English is so much better than my French or Japanese that it’s laughable. Finally, as if all of this weren’t enough, your Teamwork sidefic “Foxplay” was one of the sexiest things I’ve read in a long time. I can’t wait for your next post.
person XD
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was kinda funny with Ino and everything xD
But man! I reallt don't like Sakura's mom --U Thought you did a goos job with the personality and everything!
Update soon!
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I cannot remember if I reviewed Teamwork, but nonetheless, I loved the story. You made the characters real, in the best of ways. There was some minor OOCness in the original, but nothing that was not amply forgivable, considering the strange, but believable circumstances Team 7 was put into. Just wanted to drop you a line on it, I love the storyline, and am so happy that you are continuing!!! This is one of the few arcs that I can find myself really enjoying without the smut all the time. Bravo! Cant wait for the next chapter....

Oh! Im sure you have already stated it, but yeah. Im lazy. Is English youre first language? If not, you have an excellant grasp of it. Your grammer and general flow of writing is exceptional. The only reason I ask is because your site is mostly in French. LoL.

Much luv!
Nata
person Kaiyo No Hime
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I've been waiting for this fic ever since Teamwork was finished. It's really good so far, for an opening chapter, and I'm really expecting GREAT things for it. Plenty of.... whatever it was that I can't put my thumb on that made Teamwork such a GREAT piece of fanfiction.

/me hands the author a glass of homemade lemonade and a plate of yummy cookies to help her write the next chapter

^.^