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Aww to tell you the truth I'm a little bit disappointed. Now before you kill me let me explain: it's not like I was counting on the Naruto/Sasuke pairing more, I just assumed that the three of them feel the same for each other. But it seems that for Sakura the guys feel something like romantic love but with each other they are really only fuckbuddies, with Sakura they became lovers but with each it's just… fuckbuddies. I don't know, maybe it's because they're guys they won't go any further than this, but still… I can't help but feel disappointed…

am.. the review above is regarding chapter 4

Oookay I read the A/N. I'm so sorry, I thought this is how the rest of the fic went. I'm reviewing before I had the chance to finish the chapter because by the time I finish I might forget. Anyway, I'm leaving my email in case you want to tell me how stupid I am, it's not healthy to keep things inside XD

damn
that really makes me wonder what vol. 2 pg 35 is
XD
and I seriously hope you update with Teamwork three soon
this gets left on such a cliffy for the overall plot
and the relationship status

so, please update soon
I wanna see what happens next~!
^o^

please finsh!!!!! i went back and read everything twice again so i could get a good laugh. i would love to see the reactions of the elders faces of what they did to sakura!

so please finsh.....been waithing for a long long long while for the ending.

Thank you. I've loved both T1 and T2. Good pacing and i enjoyed the POV swapping. It's an interesting reading of Sasuke's emotional problems without making him a basket case or normal. Also, Sakura seemed like a real person and if her portrayal fluctuated a bit (as you said in one of your prefaces), i actually thought you would fluctuate and wobble a bit in such a situation. I kind of liked the arcana seal concepts. I's one of the things I think is cool about the Narutoverse hospital where patients are on IVs in the middle of complex seals. It seems to me somewhat AU with regard to the kyuubi because conversations with Chiya (old lady from Sand, I may not be spelling her name right and I'm too comfy on my sofa to look it up)and implications from Akatsuki imply that there are only 9 tailed beasts total and only one of them is a fox. So although the lot seems to echo the foxes in Japanese folklore, in Naruto's canon world there don't seem to be other kitsune. But it doesn't bother me the way off canon seems to bother some people whose comments I've read. I think of the fanfics the way I think of a movie adaptation of a book. It isn't the same thing, or even the vision I have of the book- my question is always is the movie good in its own right. I don't know if that's considered the correct attitude, I've just started reading fanfics and this is one of my first comments- I've been afraid that I's say something dumb. But, as stated at the beginning, I wanted to say thanks- and when is T3 coming out?

This is one of the best sasusakunaru stories that i have read in a long time. can't wait to read more.

Please write more. This story is fascinating, and I would really like to see how it ends, and how the baby looks with Kyubbi chakra, whether it's Sasuke's or Naruto's.

I don't mind the long chapters, really! D=

In some ways, your Naruto world fascinates me much more than the manga one. Congratulations, and I eagerly await Teamwork 3.

Also the hot sex scene you faded to black on. That'll be good, too.