rate_review Reviews

Great chapter! Kakashi at the end was really funny!

Awesome mane. I've followed the story the whole way. I would just like to ask, for one of your interludes or whatever, to post a chapter with the kid in it.

again, i want to say this is a great story, and you're doing a great job! can't wait to see more!~

hey when the fuck are you gonna write some good smut? you really suck and I hope you know that. dont bother replying in your authors notes cause im not gonna read this story ever again. DONT bother. you suck.

Yay! Hugs!

I only look into the 'threesome' section on the off chance that you've posted and I'm glad I did today.

Love ya work!
Kimra

OKAY, SO I READ UR AUTHORS NOTES...WHO CARES IF THE CHARACTER'S ARE OOC?! IT WOULDN'T BE FANFICTION, IF THEY WEREN'T! IF YOU KEPT THEM IN CHARACTER THEN YOU WOULD JUST BE WRITING THE SAME STUFF THE CREATOR WROTE! WHEN IT COMES TO THEIR PERSONALITY TRAITS, THEY DON'T SEEM TO OUT OF CHARACTER AT ALL! EVEN KAKASHI'S PERSONALITY MATCHES THE MANGA! SO DON'T LISTEN TO THE IDIOTS WHO TRY TO TELL YOU WHAT U DID WRONG...OBVIOUSLY ALOT OF THESE PEOPLE HAVEN'T READ THE MANGA OR WATCHED THE JAPANESE VERSION OF NARUTO, THE ENGLISH VERSION SUCKS! ANYWAY, I LOVE THE STORY AND THAT'S SAYING SOMETHING CUZ I'M NOT NORMALLY INTO 3 SOMES (WITH NARUTO CHARACTERS) SO WHATEVER YOUR DOING, KEEP DOING IT, CUZ ITS GOOD!

EF

Yay! I had almost given up on this fic... I love 2 in the morning conversations! They rock out loud! and yay for the limish lemon at the end! now, are you ever going to tell if the baby is a boy or a girl? and who's kid it is?

I am glad to see that you've found inspiration again, however long it did take. Of all the Naruto fictions I've read involving these three characters, I have to say that I've never read an author save one that has such a firm and steady grip on keeping them perfectly in canon and in sync with the storyline. I simply couldnt stop reading both Teamwork 1 and Teamwork 2, and read both over the course of two days. The story itself is enrapturing and alluring, and I very much love all the plot twists and turns that you've made, and I have to say that one of the main things that I really enjoy about reading these stories is the perfect sense of realism they contain pertaining to Sasuke, Sakura, and Naruto and the world in which they live. Sasuke's very real fear of Itachi standing over his child's crib in one of your drabbles, and his decision to alter his own life to the role of Protector rather than Avenger really stuck with me, and I very much enjoyed that one as well. Its very inspiring to see an author that has as much range, depth, and command of the Narutoverse and I very much look forward to reading your next installment no matter how long it takes. ^__^

That was really great. I've been reading this for a while now. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Rox

I'm really enjoying your story. A threesome is an extremely hard story to really develope personal relationships without turning them all into fuck-buddies. You totally need to congradulate yourself on such a success this story has become.

One point I want to stress to you is to not blow up on someone if they give you a review you may not like. Not everyone has to like your story. Stop and think before you get extremely angry and actually look at what the person has to say. It may help you more than you think. If they are insulting your works or being a total n00b/newb...THEN flame them straight to hell. Cause those people really need to die. Of course, you don't have to do this and you don't have to listen/agree with what I have to say....nor do i want to start a fight with you. I just want to help you out on becoming a better writer, not that you need much improvement because you're doing so well :) Feel free to message me if you wanna talk about it.