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Please continue this, I can wait for the next installment.

I have to admit, I'm one of those people who never thought she'd enjoy reading a threesome fic, but I fear you have converted me! The plot is intelligent and interesting, the characters incredibly well written, the dialogue bloody amusing and heartrending in turn and the decsriptions fluid and engaging. Basically, I'm loving this and seriously hoping you continue to keep up the good work.
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Please, please write more. This is a great story and I'd love to read the rest. *puppy eyes* please? with the best tasting fixin's on top of your favorite confection?

Honestly, I hate Sakura, BUT I have to say you made me like her more and turned me into a NaruSakuSasu shipper. Congrats. Anywhoo, I really like the story and how you are making all of them deal with their problems, and I think you have set a realistic pace.

I ABSOLUTLY Adore and love your story^-^threesomes always make EVERYONE happy. Please keep up the good work*is waiting for next chapter with bated breath*

EEEEE!! *twitch* oh. my. god. what's gonna happen??? i can't wait, but, der, i have to. so i will. i guess. this is really good and i'm really anticipating what naruto's brilliant plan is!! and i have the feeling he snitched the wrong scroll from tsunade, cause that's how it always works. anyway, i hope you've got some inspiration and can get something out soon!!~

great chapter two, always great. blah, blah, blah... i say the same thing everytime...
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'Maybe we're a squirrel demon instead,'
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Even that goddamn pipe-smoking toad of yours is starting to look good.
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"Oh, god. The -- the poor children -- the trauma -- worse than Kakashi-sensei--"
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I'm pretty sure it's Sasuke-ese for 'sexy, adorable person that I'd love to boink.'
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ooh, i love this!! you've developed the characters so well, and i can't wait to meet the baby! i love EVERYTHING about this, so i'm gonna keep reading now.
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okay... so that was chapter three... excellent as always. on to the next!!~

So you and Sasuke-kun and Naruto ... had a wild passionate orgy
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Hell no. Look at Shika and die. Your harem's already big enough
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ahhh.... great chapter. again. you are so awesome. great work, always!~

I'll make a deal with you. You update, and I'll write you a oneshot threesome for Sasuke, Naruto and Sakura. I'm not a bad writer even if I only have 1 Naruto/Sasuke fic up here (and it's not hent). But yeah. You update, and I'll write you a story, or if you want a differnt pair or anything. I'll write you a oneshot of any couple / pair / group you want, and I'll write it to the best of my abilities. THATS how much I want to read more of your story.

Your such an awesome writer and I can't wait for the second half of this chapter (err the most recent chapter), I mean I can wait... because I am waiting. But yeah. I wish I didn't have to wait is waht I'm saying. :D

Cheers!
Kimra

*snort* your complaint about the reviewers was funny, I imagine also annoying to have someone telling you what to do with your craft, if it bothers them let them write their own fic...

on with the actual fic, I'm actually a yaoi fan and did a Kyuubi fic search, after reading Teamwork: Foxplay, with reference to pregnant Sakura's husband, I had to find out more. Happily i really do like your Sakura, generally she's ill protrayed but is the right mix of innerSakura and how she protrays her self. I like the awkward way it's all slowly pulling together and the way it's not suddenly perfect. :) thanks