rate_review Reviews

I love the story. Dont listen to bullshit that some people might give you.
Love the effort.

I notice in your author notes you complained about people bitching about OOCness, but I think that if circumstances were like this most of the characters are pretty IC in my opinion. My only complaint is that Sakura is pretty amazing herself, even if she started out barely average. I don't know how far along you are in the manga, so I won't list 'should-haves.' I only ask that you push along Sakura's chakra control because she surpassed Sasuke at age twelve and she's an excellent medic-nin in the manga at fifteen. I love the bantering between Sasuke and Naruto, it's always my favorite in fics because they didn't get the time for that sort of thing in the manga and you made it unfortunate that I was reading this at two in the morning, I wanted to laugh so hard at times.
Keep writing, please!
Ja

WHY HAVE YOU NOT UPDATED!!! ARUGH!!! ARUGH!! ARUGH!!! IM DESPERATE... *GROVELS FOR AN UPDATE*

I swear, I am hooked. I read all your 'teamwork' work. And Yeah... im in love with it. But I would like for sasuke and Naruto's relationship to develop a bit more. Sasuke is already tryin to please Sakura, while Naruto is trying to please Sakura as well. Mainly, all the attention is on her, what with the baby and all. And it seems that Naruto is a bit more open and willing with his relationship with Sasuke (like always, and is to be expected) but... Its like... Its like they don't even like each other. As if they're only fuck buddies. ANd yeah, Im guessing that for now, thats all fine and dandy, but they eventually need to develop SOME feeling for each other... more than 'respect as a ninja', and 'yeah, he has a nice ass'. I onno... I guess im on the sentimental side of it.. I don't expect sasuke to go and be all lovey dovey or anything... cause that just DOESNT fit... ESPECIALLY WITH NARUTO. But it wouldn't hurt the characters (and it would please me... and Im usre a few people out there...haha) For them to actually show that they care... even just a little.


OH and one BIG turh OFF! Was sakuras little tantrum about sasuke going down on DNaruto. What the hell is her problem? I love saukra to deah, she's actually my fave character in the series... Her and Itachi.. haha. BUTTTT What the hell is her problem? Its a threesome... they're supposed to be attracted to each other. And if one of them (wheater it be sasuke, sakura, or naruto) cant stand being excluded every once in a while from a make out session... There are going to be some major problems. Eventuaally, they're bound to get hard, or wet, with one of them missing... so what? they're just not going to do anything because one is gone? They're all in it together... and they're not supposed to be jelous. LMAO. And I know its story development, and relationship devlopment, and you're still AWESOME! Im just cranky at sakuras attitude towards it, hell, If I had walked in on Sasuke about to go down on Naruto... I'd TRY to join. LMAO.


ANyways, you're great, and awesome, and I will keep up with this story. I just hope that eventually Sasuke and Naruto wont be so total jerks towards each other. Or I mean... They can be total jerks, but every once in a while they should show affection. As for Sakura, she should accept that she's not the main one. And she should be happy that she gots to hunks to get laid by. =/

That was great. I love it. Not too heavy on sex and porn, Great story. I can't wait for The Plan to come out.

HUZZAH! Your fic-writing skills amaze me. *cling*

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This story rocks! I like how they become closer with each other. It's... sweet. Makes me feel all romantic and stuff. Can 't wait for more ^_^

I would just like to say that this is the BEST fanfic I have ever read!! It's so great. I love it!! The story line is spectacular and the character's personalities are the best! I started reading the first part of teamwork around 1:00 am and I was planning to go to bed after the first few paragraphs, but I couldn't stop reading and even started the sequel and ended up got to bed at 5:40. Anyways this story is just the best and the people who send you negative comments can just go hump a goat. I hope you post the next chapter soon and you should look into being an author.

From: your number 1 fan (as of thursay at 1:00 am.)

You know i love this story asuka.

Keep it up ^.^

Uh, you really need to change your author notes a little bit when you post somewhere else. Saying that there won't be any future NC17 stuff on a adultfanfiction.net fic is kinda... odd. And disapointing! *shakes fist* lol