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for Further From Hell

by KeairaxSeiaa

person -ArmageddonAngel-
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank God! I was so afriad that Itasasu was going extinct! Anyway thank you gor the great story! I the Itasasu stories I see are very poorly written. It makes me sad... (T.T) But not yours! I love the plot. The only thing I have to say is that Oro-sama seems a little off... I can't how, his personality is just a little... stranger. Overall bravo you 2! I'll be watching you! o (^.^) o

-ArmageddonAngel-
person blueinferno
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this alot! lol its well good! please update soon! if you dont then...then...i will cry! >< lol
person Mouse
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, buuut~ You should update. Seeing as how its been like four months XD.
person viciouscallisto
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the story so far!! its cute to see how protective itachi is of sasuke-kun. i wonder how sasuke-kun will be able to deal with going to school and having a vampire brother. oh and if orochimaru-sama gets tired of itachi will he turn his attention to sasuke-kun? will he? i hope so. anywho update soon.
person Emma
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!! Please continue with the enxt part soon! :D
person poo_n_pee
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh i love vampiric uchiha ficcys. itachi has a vampire is BeaUtiful and sasuke hating about going to school is just so cute. oro's greasy hair is like...ew XD itachi is kinda erm giving in too but its cool! update soon!!!!
person One_Sick_Mind
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit,, Orochimaru!

Holy shit, KAKASHI!!!!!!!!
Ha ha, I was waiting for Kabuto to show up so when you mentioned silver hair I thought, "Yay! Kabuto! ...wait, why does he have a mask on his face? You didn't damage Kabuto's face, did you?? --- oh wait, it's just Kakashi."

These guys are TOTALLY catching me off guard! Ha ha, I love it!!

I'm liking this so far!! Well-written, a weird, sorta out-of-place plot, but you make it work okay. It's hard to keep vampire stories from getting clichè, but I'm sure if you stay on your toes with creativity you'll be able to put your own unique twists on it. It's definitely different to be reading about the Naruto characters in this context, and it's not often you see "daily life around Vampire Mansion" kinda things... this is looking very cool.

Why on earth didn't you write in the DETAILS of Itachi's first time with Orochimaru??? C'mon, VAMPIRE SEX! And non-con!!! Am I the only one who's excited by this idea??? Blood Play! C'mon, you can't have an ItaSasu vampire fic without BLOODPLAY!!

I hope that Itachi turns Sasuke, but I also hope that the plot works out to be less obvious than that... I trust ya, though...

*cringes* OMG, I can just imagine Itachi walking into his room and Sasuke's not there... I'll cry if that happens...

I sure hope we meet Vampire!Kabuto!!!

Ooh! Ooh! Can the vampires FLY, like in "Forever Knight"?? Do they have amazing hearing, like in "Forever Knight"?? Can they move to Toronto and become Canadians, like in "Forever Knight"?? Can you write a "Forever Knight" fic????? OMG NICK!!!! *goes off but is pulled back by Sasuke and Itachi* Oh! ItaSasu! Yays!!

And with that way-too-long-rant, I bid ye goodnight! Keep up the good work!!!
person blisblop
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,after the first chapter you said you loved me(the readers)I let you chew on me and and everything!Now,not a word,it has been so loooooooooong.I need your brand of Itachi,starts chanting and yelling his name.More please?
person blisblop
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chants*mote more more
person just_me
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to to say that Itachi's sweet personality is to die for. *swoon* :P