rate_review Reviews

*twitch* that was really good but- how could you cut out the lemon????? Gah- you work it all up to this one part- and you dont have it!!!!!!!!!! *crys* not faiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiir *whimper* Just go for it. If you can write what you HAVE written then you can sure as hell right more!!!!!

hey when are u gonna continue this fic!? *throws cononut*

Oh my god...ANGST!! ::shudders happily:: ^_^

C'MON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAKE IT LONGER ABOUT JUST HOW MUCH SASUKE AND NEJI HAVE TO DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!
Kai

Gaara really is HOT,he scared me and I was reading it!Spanking and denial games are fun,ice on welts works well too and knife play can be done with demons,they heal(and do not get/give killer S.T.D.'s)meeting and pretending to meet each other anew is fun.How is that for ideas or do you want more detail(fisting would be brilliant,pleeth?)?

Please write a sequel to this
It freakin' rocks
I know other ppl probably said the same goddamn thing though
wOOt

HOLY FUCK THAT WAS HOT.

I loved the NejiGaara scene the most though. Poor Neji. ^^;;; >D

Yay! Terry Prattchett fan!
*Glomps you*
Gah... needs scary lemon.... I wanna see the lemon... WAhhhh!!!!!
*Does uber Uke eyes at you* please?

I think i might just go ballistic...YOU CUT OUT THE LEMON?!?!?!? ok, ok, i know you said you just hadn't gotten around it, which i understand...uninspired writing is never of the good. BUT STILL!!! Ok, I'll stop my ranting. I thought that the story was good. I like scary Gaara coming back into your fics, because you don't usually make him that scary. I'm a little confused about how Neji's and Sasuke's kiss is going to be resolved...I mean, maybe I'm just traditional, but I don't feel that being drunk is enough of an excuse for kissing someone else. But then again, i don't want Gaara to hurt Neji TOO much. Hehe, a little is always good. Please update soon! Let us know what happened!

Rough abd intense, but fun at the same time. This is written quite well. There is a liitle character bending, but it is very little. Great work!