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cliffy, hate cliffys!!! it's okay, yay, everyone's there!! XDD now, i'm getting less confused, yay!! i really enjoy reading your fic, update soon please!! XDDD

First off I want to say again, Thankyou! for the pic. *Glomps you* I love it!
Cant wait for the next chapter, curious to know what Daishizen wants to talk to Naruto about. Didn't you say that he knew Kyuubi?
Well now that Sasuke knows that Takeshi has the sharingan, well he be teaching him?
Are you going to have Tomoe and Konohamaru be a couple too. Cause that would be cute! Or are they only going to be friends?
I kind of get the feeling that the story is almost done. Or am I wrong? I hope I am.^^
Hope you update soon, cant wait for the next chapter. As you cant tell, I want to read more!XP

Ahh, your lemons are really getting better! That was great! I love that part when Orochimaru pulls that sword out of his mouth and kenrute was all grossed out. That was very funny. Why doesn't Sasuke teach his son the jutsu's? Is it couse he doesn't think Takeshi will have the sharingan?
And you updated so much faster this time! I hope this keeps up. Oh, if ya don't mind, do you think you could draw Gaara and Shukaku together for me? You are such a good drawer and all. *Makes puppy-dog eyes at you* Please?
Anyway, update soon, kay! I really do love this fic!^^

yay for the lemon! great job! and yessss!! the snake bastard is dead!! whoohoo!! i totally love your fic!! update soon, with more lemons!! XDDD

yay, an update!! i love it! hehehehe, Ken, it's like he has split personalities, which he kinda does. XDD i'm confused at the moment, so many new details that need to be processed! XDDD I love this fic!! Update Soon!

Yay! You updated!!! I think Kenrute had a little too much fun taunting Mazeo, hehe. That was fun to read.
Ooo, the sound is closing in. Why doesn't Kenrute tell Naruto and Sasuke? Why does he feel he has to keep it to himself??
I hope that you update soon. I want to read more.
I also hope that you have some yummy goodness coming up between Kenrute and Mazeo.XD

okay less confused now!! XP that song was soo sad but it was awesome!! great writing, i loved how ken just kissed maezo infront of neji and hi bro! hehehehe, nice! XDD UPDATE SOON!!

aww!!!! this chapter was just way too cute!! i loved it. kenrute and mazeo are just too cute together!!!
and that lime scene was real good. diffinitely loved that part. too bad it was only a dream.XD
cant wait for you to update again. dont wait too long!!

yay! an update!! hehehehe, so cute ken likes maezo!! hehehehe and doesn't really know it!! nice!! oh no he can't use sharingan, so sad!! ;_; poor boy!! then why does oro want him?? Now i'm even more confused, update soon and end my confusion!!! XDDD