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for I've loved you since I've known you

by avanhorn

person spikemyangel
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is AU, cute & fluffy, and everyone is extremely OOC (it's ok if you like that kinda stuff - power to ya!). i'm always happy to see others who worship the almighty genius Joss - he is god. But when i saw a chapter titled "seeing red"...well, it doesn't quite fit (by that I mean- totally out of place), considering the BtVS epi of the same name. did you pick it because it sounded cool? whatever, BtVS & Angel were my creepy obsessions before i got into anime, so i'm a bit protective of them all. I probably won’t read anymore of this fic, but I'm sure there are plenty of people who enjoy it.
person ghostninja85
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope that it's just bronchitis... If it's something serious, then I hope they catch it soon.

I liked your allusion to... some well known fic whose name I forgot (I read so many) about the Sasuke-sexual part. It might be Nazo's. And of course I'm happy that the boys are officially boyfriends.

Hopefully everthing will be alright!. Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Tsugath
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute and fluffy! What about the coughing? Does Sasuke have TB or maybe lung cancer? That sucks!
person Sasuke
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so very OOC... I mean, hello, do you seriously think Sasuke would say, “I’m fine. I’ll be better faster than you can say blueberry pancakes.” Come ON.
Sasuke + blueberry pancakes = oh so very OOC
person Tsugath
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, bronchitis is better than TB. And the whole snuggly thing is so kawaii!
person Yurikai Kurosaki
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NOOOOO!!!!!WHAT'S WRONG WITH SASUKE!!!...
It's a pretty cute story you got there so far and well written, so don't let it go. Keep up the nice work!^^
See ya
person yukiko
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiih cliffhanger !!!! I hate those. please more, I love sweet sweet sasunaru
person silverfox
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO poor sasuke poor naruto please update soon like now dammit
person ghostninja85
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! Don't let anything evil happen to Sasuke! It would be so sad if something happened to him. Naruto would be devestated.

Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O Eep!!! No, Sasuke, you can't get sick!!! Sickness = bad!!! *flutters around like a spastic idiot* LOL ^___~ *suddenly glomps you* Wonderful, wonderful author!!! So punctual with your updates!!! *gives you chocolates* Here: I find that these often work just as well as the perverbial "fire" in order to modivate you, and personally I prefer them, sooooo...... ^___~ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! (I'm sure you'll have no problem with that what-so-ever, right?) ^___^ Ja ne!!!