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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... it's so innocent.... and yet, not. LOL This is really well done! Keep up the good work. ^^
There were a few grammatical errors but nothing huge, so it's really good. ^^
~Hawk
There were a few grammatical errors but nothing huge, so it's really good. ^^
~Hawk
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waiiii how pretty. what a great fic. i love your quick updates. (i don't wanna jinx it tho :P damn, i might have already done so) your writing style's a pretty calm one, i like that. calm sceneries, calm characters, calm emotions. that's great. it's a break from the overly done emotions (where everyone's yellin or screamin etc etc) hehe. it's cute! I like it. keep your originality ;)
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wha it's so sweet! =P please update soon!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w000t they are soooooooo cute
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg sooo kawaii!!!!!
now you just want to hug them don't you??
now you just want to hug them don't you??
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! The sparks are flying ( in good way )
So cute how they are slowly coming together. No wham bam Thanka you ma'am sex
So cute how they are slowly coming together. No wham bam Thanka you ma'am sex
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I absolutely LOVE this. This is one of the most romantic fics I've read in a long time. Please, keep up the excellent work! I'll be eagerly awaiting the future chapters. :D
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you, I really really do! I worship you and I want more ^___^
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*takes a deep breath* AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! that was sooooo sweet. the whole sasuke fussing over naruto and the cuddling during the movie. just priceless!! i was getting a little misty-eyed myself back there during that scene. and the kisses! *squeals happily* so kawaii!
but, seriously, i am totally liking how this is turning out. your writing style is simply wonderful. I love how their friendship is almost perfect now and how adding a physical *cough*sexual*cough* aspect into it could only make it better.... until someone tries to interfere with the blossoming love between the two. *shifty eyes* anyway, lovely work. Looking foward to your next update, so until then, ja! ^__^
but, seriously, i am totally liking how this is turning out. your writing style is simply wonderful. I love how their friendship is almost perfect now and how adding a physical *cough*sexual*cough* aspect into it could only make it better.... until someone tries to interfere with the blossoming love between the two. *shifty eyes* anyway, lovely work. Looking foward to your next update, so until then, ja! ^__^
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS AWESOME!!! Although... I gotta admit I wish I knew why Sasuke's reaction to Naruto cutting himself wasso deep oO; Maybe it has something to do with the next chapter >_>;;;;; ANyways... UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! XD