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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn that was hot! i hope i can write smut this good when i finally let naruto and sasuke have sex in my fic. :)
i think the reason it is so good is because their aggressive words and actions are so in character. thank you for writing narusasu- i love you!
i think the reason it is so good is because their aggressive words and actions are so in character. thank you for writing narusasu- i love you!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was CREEPY.
I think you just fucked my brains out. There is NO WAY I would want to live in that village.
Naruto is crazy. Completely. Absolutely. Crazy. His hormones are plain nuts.
And, uh, I really feel sorry for Sasuke. He was abused. ;__; Besides, there is a serious power abuse on the part of the Hokage-sama... creepy moron. >_<`
But I think I really like how this whole thing ends. XD
I think you just fucked my brains out. There is NO WAY I would want to live in that village.
Naruto is crazy. Completely. Absolutely. Crazy. His hormones are plain nuts.
And, uh, I really feel sorry for Sasuke. He was abused. ;__; Besides, there is a serious power abuse on the part of the Hokage-sama... creepy moron. >_<`
But I think I really like how this whole thing ends. XD
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But I think I kind of like how this whole thing ends. XD
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was fucking HOT!!! And it just went on and on and on. OMG, must go fan myself....
Really, though, nicely done. I was laughing and groaning the whole way through. Laughing? cuz it was hilarious! Groaning? cuz I know Sasuke's going to be HURTING! Sadistic Naruto....yummm
Really, though, nicely done. I was laughing and groaning the whole way through. Laughing? cuz it was hilarious! Groaning? cuz I know Sasuke's going to be HURTING! Sadistic Naruto....yummm
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
luv thiiiiis!!!!! dominated sashuke is the besssst!!! yay!
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god oh god oh god oh god
that was soooo wrong. I LOVED EVERY SECOND OF IT! ^_^ oh yeah, i should definitely be ashamed of how much i liked seeing sasuke get pounded into the ground. i should. really.
sasuke is so naruto's bitch. yup. *and glomps neji just for the hell of it*
that was soooo wrong. I LOVED EVERY SECOND OF IT! ^_^ oh yeah, i should definitely be ashamed of how much i liked seeing sasuke get pounded into the ground. i should. really.
sasuke is so naruto's bitch. yup. *and glomps neji just for the hell of it*
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*uncontrollable snickers* I loved it! I usually don't really like people's projections of Neji but your's was really funny, even if all he did was laugh at Sasuke half the time. Also the last bit of banter was HILARIOUS!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA!*continues laughing and chokes on air* Hahhaha! Too funny. This fic was just as well written and hailarious as the last.
My favorite lines:
“However, Jiraiya has graciously sent along a copy of this,” Naruto said, pulling out an all-too-familiar orange book. “Kakashi has offered to pay for prostitution services for you and I managed to get you this!” he smiled brilliantly as he triumphantly displayed a bottle of pills loudly proclaiming in bold letters, their “libido-enhancing” strength.
And:
Then, just for fun, he assigned Shikamaru for substitution at the Academy where he would spend then next few days surrounded by screaming four year olds who were just learning how to throw sharp, pointy objects.
And:
“I shall try my best to impregnate him, anyway.”
And:
“As soon as he recovers, I think I’ll take him over the desk… Then I can have him hide under the desk and suck me off all day long! Doesn’t that sound like fun, Sasuke?”
The answer was a kick in the groin, the movement which had both men on the ground, one whimpering from the pain in front, one grimacing from the pain in back.
Neji sighed and turned away from the sight, pretending he didn’t know either one
BWAAHAHHAHA! Poor Neji.. Anyways, great job on this fic and I hope you do another pairing with Naruto as the seme. Mmm, seme Naruto. *holds a hankie to her nose trying to stop the blood flow*
My favorite lines:
“However, Jiraiya has graciously sent along a copy of this,” Naruto said, pulling out an all-too-familiar orange book. “Kakashi has offered to pay for prostitution services for you and I managed to get you this!” he smiled brilliantly as he triumphantly displayed a bottle of pills loudly proclaiming in bold letters, their “libido-enhancing” strength.
And:
Then, just for fun, he assigned Shikamaru for substitution at the Academy where he would spend then next few days surrounded by screaming four year olds who were just learning how to throw sharp, pointy objects.
And:
“I shall try my best to impregnate him, anyway.”
And:
“As soon as he recovers, I think I’ll take him over the desk… Then I can have him hide under the desk and suck me off all day long! Doesn’t that sound like fun, Sasuke?”
The answer was a kick in the groin, the movement which had both men on the ground, one whimpering from the pain in front, one grimacing from the pain in back.
Neji sighed and turned away from the sight, pretending he didn’t know either one
BWAAHAHHAHA! Poor Neji.. Anyways, great job on this fic and I hope you do another pairing with Naruto as the seme. Mmm, seme Naruto. *holds a hankie to her nose trying to stop the blood flow*
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely hilarious. Will definitely make people read this. I LOVED the humor. Your wit rocks. :3
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Phoe-chan the too lazy to login.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. And by the way, I wouldn't care if it was 20 pages long if you seperated into chapters!!!!!!!!!!!