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for Keys to Leadership

by Letta

schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are now officially my goddess XD!! That one *did* have a different feel from your first one but I really liked this one more...that may be b/c I'm a NaruxSasu fangirl but besides that, your writing and Naruto's antics were just exceptional. THE BEST Hokage!Naruto fic I've ever read ^___^
person Narratior
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just want to ask you to please, please keep writing about the Hokage Naruto and his perverted adventures. Also if you have any similar writings, could you please direct us, your beloved fans, there. Thank You.
person Lermbay
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was probably the most funniest and hottest fic I have read as of yet. Awesome writing style. You should really think of a sequel for this one. Like what happens after the week. In any case I cant wait to read more of your stories. =^.^=
person silent laugh
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MUAHAHAHAHHAHA I love how you made them figth for dominance\!! I mean come on it's not like Sasuke would just be a cute little doll and stuf and he's definetly the uke!!!!!

I enjoyed the way he was all beaten up!!!
person hinshihoushi
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read both this story and the diplomacy one. Loved them both, but this one was sooooo funny. I lmao during most of it. Hope to see more from you. Thanks for sharing your stories.
person akuma_river
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO, oh god. that is another stitch.

Anyways love the stories. So how badly is Naruto going to punish Sasuke for the ball crusher?

You really should write more, you have an awesome tallent.
A rare blend of seriousness, humor, and sex, sex, sex. Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.
person MindGames5150
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is deffinately my favorite one shot!!! Unless, you plan to continue it.....? *hopeful pout*
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm still not a fan of Sasuke, never will be. Naruto is okay. I like how you've portayed him though. But I think I'd like to see more Gaara. Hm...maybe a threesome. Lol. But I like Neji in this. He's so amusing. And omg I laughed so hard at

“On your hands and knees.”



As he obeyed, Sasuke could almost imagine his mildly retarded brain cells saying, ‘Duh… sure thing Mr. Hokage! Whatever you say!’

Classic. I ope you write another. >_>...with Gaara...<_<....
person Baka_Tsu
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE. THAT WAS FUCKING HOT. Oh man.... xD Im still in shock to see Sasuke as the bitch haha, then again, he DID put up a fight so... ~___~ <3 It was hot ~__~ <3
person ochiba
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are a fic GODDESS *____* Both of your fics own. This is EXACTLY how a Naruto seme should behave *laughs* Man oh man... you sure know how to write characters... especially characters covered in smut.