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for Keys to Leadership

by Letta

person shinizero
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good lord'n'butter, this was...something else #o_o# Hilarious (the vote bit killed me, truly), hot, pretty darned IC--ohyeah, I'd reread *heh* Just a little bit more roughness than is my ideal--I definitely believe they'd go all out on each other, not hold back, but I think especially Naruto would be at least a bit guilty-feeling or sheepish to rough someone up quite to that extent ^^; They'd know each other could take it, but they're still friends and still each other's most important people, I would think, and when one cares about someone like that, one doesn't tend to want to hurt them *too* badly ^_~ But, a lot of fun, and I like how Naruto claimed Sasuke as his one and only from there on ^__^ As close to an ILY as those two'd get at the start of any sort of relationship *heh* And did I say hot? Ohyeah, I did *heh*
person ghostninja85
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your Naruto. The relationship between him and the ninja is perfect. I could definately see him being evil to all of his friends like that.

Please Please Please continue to write. You have mucho talent.
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hooo shit! THAT was HOT! sasuke sure got sexed. ^^
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chokes*

Abso-fucking-lutely mind-blowing.

While I adore angry!boy-sex this was way past my borders of violence, but damn was it so incredibly funny. The witty repartee had me laughing, the hot sex had me drooling and the physical abuse had me wincing. Your Naruto is my dream-man, but Neji really came in on a close second *laughs*

I was amazed at how original the one-liners were, the flirting, the teasing—good god man, your style of writing is very refreshing.

I sincerely hope to see more, and will be checking out your Author’s profile.

*shakes head*

Sorry if I’m not articulate, I had trouble formulating thoughts for a review *grin*
person Rika-Chan
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are amazing!! This was an absolute great, made me laugh. Ah such a Sasuke would be a dream come true *starry eyes*. Keep up the good work. It's a pleasure to read.
person Sailor Comet
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, this one does feel different from the last one. Still hot, but I can't help feel bad for Sasuke being so manhandled. XP

Although, I do love me some seme-Naruto. But Sasuke in this... well, Gaara in the last one was much more an active participant... while there's implied consent, it's really not cool to just shove your penis into somebody's mouth. Sasuke's totally being thrown around. o_o; (I mean, yeah, he didn't fight, but it's still not as happy a feel as the previoius fic.)

That said, I do love Neji's bantering with Naruto before the smut occurs. And the poll about whether or not Sasuke's gay.

~Sam

person ST
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg. this was hillarious. i most definitely like this one more than the other. haha. i very much enjoyed this.
person Tsugath
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! Hot Wild Cat smut! More authors ought to write that between NaruSasu, or SasuNaru! Can we have a sequel where Sasuke gets his revenge?
person kai
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome!! i love that even though naruto is hokage, he still pulls pranks on his peers!! i love all the sexual inedous that naruto said in front sasuke and him being gay and all. And the last convo between naruto, neji and sauke was funny. “I shall try my best to impregnate him, anyway.” ~ best line!! Hiliours!! XDDD Write some more!!!!
person chem chick
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! This was too hilarious. I think my favorite line was the poll on Sasuke's sexuality. Too funny! Great Job!