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More than hot, that was fun. That is a tense and uneasy realtionship, but a good one. You actually made this quite funny. I'm inpressed. Keep up the good work!!

“Go away!” Naruto yelled out, voice slightly hoarse, “I’m busy screwing Sasuke to the ground!” XD

Thats good one...thats relly good one - Love your fic!

My favorite and most drool-worthy lines:

“Go away!” Naruto yelled out, voice slightly hoarse, “I’m busy screwing Sasuke to the ground!” ROTFLMAO!!!

“Hokage-sama, move your ass faster!” XDDDDD

“I shall try my best to impregnate him, anyway.” OMG!! Bwahahaha!!

“As soon as he recovers, I think I’ll take him over the desk… Then I can have him hide under the desk and suck me off all day long! Doesn’t that sound like fun, Sasuke?” I'll GLADLY take his place if he refuses, and if he accepts i want front row seats!

*holds a bloody hankie up to her nose* you are a god......wonderful. simply wonderfully written smut with a plot. this is most definitely going on my favorites list. man, i would kill to see and get me some of that action. this was just too good. looking foward to seeing more works from you! ^___^

MAN!!! That was sooooooooooooo good!!!!


I was laughing so hard at certain parts that I could barely breathe....but in a good way.



I also love Keys to Diplomacy and it would be so awsome if you could write a follow up fic....



Or.....



Maybe just a damn good Kiba/Naruto fic.


We need more of them here


Well


Keep on writing


Mina

lol, man that was absolutely hilarious. Keep up the good work. Update with another A.S.A.P. I LOVE YOUR WORK MAN!!!

Hells, you can beat up Sasuke like that anytime you want. I fully encourage you to do it again. Often. In fact, I think that the Kazekage should come back to Konoha for more diplomatic discussions, and that Sasuke should be there with Naruto this time. Since Sasuke’s so good with his mouth, you know. Eloquent. Really.

Obviously, I quite enjoyed this story. (^.^) Can’t wait to see more from you, especially if it involves Sasuke being violently fucked. (Or Gaara, for that matter. Hot.)

this was so much fun to read! The whole script was both refreshing and originial (and not only because Naruto got to be the seme); course all characters were a bit OOC, but hey, this is some years ahead of the manga and Sasuke, that poor thing, had a splitting headache^^
Anyway; I really luv it. Naruto was so much fun what with his torturing the ANBU.
Thanks for giving me a good laugh and a rippled stomach

gaaaah! I loved it! this is seriously the best ever....

*fans self* ohhh, hawt. I loved the lemon scene (whee! mouth fucking! whee, on all fours!), but what really got to me was the teasing and aggression. rawr, baby! X3 Neji and the banter at the end really crack me up. Nice fic, very nice. If you have a sequel, i'll definitely read it, though it's quite complete on its own. (but... i'd really like to see if you could pull off a narusasugaara lemon... though, yeah, sasuke and sharing are so not synonymous XD)

omg omg omg, u did continued!! brilliant writing! i like how it's so descriptive.. haha..and humourous!
especially loved the part about the brain cells.. haha let's hope you'll write more ne? ^^