rate_review Reviews

Oh shit is all I have to say. Um, can I like borrow this Naruto and, uh, take him home for a while. Man... he just gave and gave and gave. Sakura is a lucky girl, and that Sasuke boy should have been taking notes. I'd love to wake up to that scenario in the morning. But where the hell did Naruto learn all that? I have got to fan myself, wow. Naruto. Hot Hot Hot.

WOW.....W-O-W


That was so freaking hot...Its hard to find threesomes of team seven but this has got to be the BEST! Oh my god! Naruto is a freaking SEX GOD! Woot! I loved how he just took control...*_* Like a MAN...Ugh...*Fans self*

I would love to see more of this deliciousness...Mmm mm mm...

oh dear that was really good. even got me alittle wet!

Ahhh...more literary crack. Thanks.

Love it,again.

OMG. I need a cigarette. And a shower. Yes. Yes, a cigarette in the shower. Uh, um, I forgot I don't smoke. Man, you made do that. +___+``

"Okay, maybe he can sort of see the appeal. From afar. But women sure are freakily fast to get over it. And Naruto must be an alien. Or maybe it's a ninjutsu."

And this line made laugh. Hard. For five minutes. Really.

There's no sex in the main story (which is awesomely good, btw)... but this one side fic does it all XD.

LOL! I love the way the ending circled back around to the morning that Teamwork began with, except Sasuke's perspective.

"He wants something to drink, now, so that he can forget his thoughts, or at least have a good excuse for them." <--- This is my Quote of the Day.

Voyeur!Sasuke was interesting, though not as good at FuckedHardUpTheAssByKyuubi!Sasuke.

"That's his spot -- both of these are his spots. He's the one Naruto challenges and the one Sakura crushes on, and he really dislikes having his weight in the balance of their team suddenly disappear, and neither of them having the decency to notice." This is the best ever. The idea, the disgrunted surprise coming from a drunk Sasuke, and his reaction. I really like the mood and style you used with this, unexpected but it work very well in my opinion, the present tense definitely added to the whole thing. It made it obvious how caught up they all were in the moment and kept the description very real and immediate, no worrying about the past, no flashbacks, just what was happening right then. It was incredibly hot. ^_^ You also kept Sasuke's reactions to a minimum which helped the 'caught-up-in-it-all' feeling well too; he didn't question, nor was he terribly surprised by any of this, no time or brain power for such things. ^_^

I really liked your description of their actions too, you kept away from the really graphic descriptions of the action one being inside another and focused on the touches and feelings of skin against skin. I especially liked all references to muscles flexing, tensing, rolling or anything similar against skin and Sasuke touching Sakura's back in the bathtub. That was the first gentle thing that had happened and the contemplative attitude fit well.

This does make me desperately curious as to what Naruto thought during and after the whole incident though, he did get pretty rough and I think there would be a lot more turmoil confusion and fear than we saw through Sakura's eyes in the first chapter of Teamwork. *prays for plot bunnies to breed* Anyway, wonderful wonderful idea and wonderful wonderful writing. Such a rare marvelous combinations. You've also made me a SasuSakuNaru fan forever, even though I am not a SasuSaku or NaruSaku fan either... so... congrats?

man i love this and i love you. You have got to update, A.S.A.P.