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for The Dream

by severina

person elyanley
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds delicious^^ Really yummy, a little sad (Sasu' Parents and their death..) but apart from that, just yummy and a little addicting^^
person elyanley
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ps: ^-^ I don't care if this ends Sasunaru or Narusasu or a mix from that, as long as you doesn't make them extreme-ukes (you know.. Rape-me-ukes... there are sooo OOC.. and too girly...)
But do what you want.. I won't certianly cry.. promise ^^
person kati
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the dream lemon was awesome but y'know, if you haven't decided the pairings then how come it was sasuke and a blonde-blue-eyed guy that could only be naruto, in the dream? Can you make this sasunaru rather then narusasu? Pretty please? I really like this but i don't really like narusasu so you'd make me cry!!
person Snow Ahriman
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update. It'll be a good plot line so please update and help a fangirl out.
person mitsune
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you need to update soon the plots getting a little thicker so do your best, ill be waiting for the next chapter please post it up soon, ive got a feeling on this fic of yous just keep on going... wet dreams who would suspect sasuke to be such a pervert?... well ok so the silent types are the suspicious ones i guess hehehe this is a nice start so please post your update soon gambatte! ja! ^_^.
person silverfox
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAH great story please update like now!!
person Yurikai Kurosaki
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too SHORT!!!! ^_^ For a shorty fic as yours, i have to say that i totally liked it! The whole idea with the dreams is really interesting and honestly, i can't wait to see how the hell Sasuke is gonna manage the last one he had! héhé...Anyway, as for the suggestions for the pairings, i know there is a LOT of SasuNaru out there but i think (only my opinion!) that this pairing suits your fic for the best (Still just my opinion!)Hihi. Oh yeah, i also had a suggestion concerning the pairing character to Sasuke, but as i don't know for sure who it will be, i'd rather wait for your second chapter before telling you anything...i want to know if my idea is worthy of your story. You have a great start here so keep your good work and please, next time do it a littlebit longer! ^^ See ya
person T.K-kun
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!! it's very interesting. just knowing that it may cometrue is great XD.
is this a sasunaru or narusasu?either way, it'll e good.(prefers sasunaru though=D)
person Hiso-chan
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.0 Wow.... So is Sasuke going to go to extreme messures to keep away from Naruto?
person Inugami
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This kinda reminds me of this manga I read called Koi wa ...... where did you get yor inspiration from? Very interesting beginning. Hurry and update soon.