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for Right in Front of You

by Tohru

person Istanbul
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kenny you're...you're not smart
person Kenny
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Now lets do some stories of our own maybe we can have sex
person gonekrazy3000
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic..... beautifully written. the characters are perfectly in character...... good work dude. write more naru/saku
person LuffySP
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! NOT ONLY A STRAIGHT STORY, BUT A SAKUNARU! I'm delighted. Although I felt there wasn't enough sex >.< Plus, it seemed like Sakura was in pain the whole time. I want to say, I think Naruto's really cool, she's going on and on about Sasuke and he's totally cool with it. He's defenitly a great guy. Good job and keep writing.
person armed an\' dangerous
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh, I'd have to say that this story is rather mediocre at best.
person Lisan
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good for a one-shot, is there going to be any development?