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for Thou Blind Man's Mark

by Majenta

person Mei
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this. It's got insanity, rape, abuse and intreaging inner thoughts. This is just wonderful! I love that it's SASUKE who's going through all of this. Just a wonderful idea. I hope you write more!
person Funky
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found this from the Crimson Shade website. There are only two OroSasuke! And (obviously) yours is one of them.

And man, am I glad they put it there! This is GREAT! I don't usually read one-shots, but this was amazing. I love how well you charactarize lost!sasuke. He's so. . .insane. Broken. I love it!! Great job. I hope you write more!!

I love how Sasuke interprets their relationship. And how even though Sasuke has given up EVERYthing, in the end, Orochimaru winds up not needing him (...my interpretation. You meant that, right?) except as a sex toy. Amazing. Ironic! I crave more. . .good luck with school and everything, by the way.
person Kansou
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really, really enjoyed this. This review will have no organization. . .sorry.

You did a wonderful job getting Sasuke's thoughts on paper. He seems so lost! I love that this story is about insanity. And inadvertently about Sasuke's choice to go to Orochimaru and the consequences. Wah, this is great. Sasuke is almost definitely disassociating, though. Poor dear!

I hope someone rescues poor Sasuke. He can't take care of himself anymore and is trapped in an abusive relationship. I feel so strongly for him! Sasuke has suffered enough. He needs to go home and have someone take care of him and help him put himself together. His self-esteem is shot, he thinks he's only useful in bed, he's extremely dependent and his memories are deteriorating. Can you imagine how hard it would be to talk to him?

. . .I hope you write more. On anything. Man, I loved this. Thanks for sharing! Feel free to write (LOTS!!) more stories about insanity, loss and abuse. You're good at it. XD

Great job!
person nescione
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. I wasn't sure what to expect when I clicked on the link, but now I'm glad I did; this is delightfully, disturbingly creepy. Sasuke's internal monologue is beautifully done; everything has a strange, dreamlike quality to it. There needs to be more fic of this quality dealing with Sasuke's time with Orochimaru.
person sasu_muffin
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. just WOW. You really need to continue this. It was beautifully written. If I had to describe their relationship...if they could even have one, would be exactly like this. Really, wow. I am awed. CONTINUE!
person Juli
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, thank you for this. I absolutely loved how you wrote this and I enjoyed your description of their relationship. Your writing is also very vivid; I felt like I was right there with them. :3 *sighs happily*
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here's your review, as promised :D A most excellent fic. Chock full of angst, sex, and insanity...all the things I love in a story :DDD I sincerely hope you write more ^.~ Will be looking for your work here and on LJ *lovelove*