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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah at first i thought this story was a little bad but still good in its on little way plus i liked the ploy. but then i get to ch. 4 and now i think your just righting random shit! you completely ruined the story with that chapter i mean what was the point of getting naruto raped?????(not to mention making him a dumb-ass!)=.=" just horrible! Not saying it in a bad way (tho i already did >.<) you should put more thought in your future stories this one would have been good but u just ruined it with that chap.
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG!!! Itachi is such a whore! Please keep writing, I love it!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey^^
i read your story and thought i'd just leave a comment
not bad ;] please go on
where do you come from? I#m from germany what you can
probably guess from my "good" english xD
~bye~
i read your story and thought i'd just leave a comment
not bad ;] please go on
where do you come from? I#m from germany what you can
probably guess from my "good" english xD
~bye~
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That story was ok. I was just woundering if you where going to continue it or not. If you did continue it i would read it though i would like to see longer chapters. anyway bye bye.
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was sweet... i don't like the fact that itachi is such and not-being-able-to-keep-his-dick-in-his-pans type of guy....
i guess that the storry is still okay though... like it
i guess that the storry is still okay though... like it
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Sasuke's so emotional! It's cool. But you need to update really soon. Okay? Okay!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT JUST ENDED!!!!! HOW CAN YOU JUST END IT LIKE THAT?!?!?! AUUUGGGHH!!!! DAMN ITACHI!!! UPDATE OR I'LL KILL YOU ALL!!! AUGH! GOD DAMMIT!!!!
Someone not so very mad: Please Update. She and another reader are plotting ways to torture and kill you if u dont update soon. I'd hate to see you killed.....
Another Reader: I've read this on regular ff.n and...... it didn't have rape scenes...WHY!? But it is kinda sad.... why did Itachi have to be evil? Why did Sasuke and Naruto have all the bad stuff happen to them!? WHY CAN'T SAKURA BE RAPED OR BEATEN!!?? SHE NEEDS TO DIE!!!!!!!!.........annoying bitch.....
Someone not so very mad: Please Update. She and another reader are plotting ways to torture and kill you if u dont update soon. I'd hate to see you killed.....
Another Reader: I've read this on regular ff.n and...... it didn't have rape scenes...WHY!? But it is kinda sad.... why did Itachi have to be evil? Why did Sasuke and Naruto have all the bad stuff happen to them!? WHY CAN'T SAKURA BE RAPED OR BEATEN!!?? SHE NEEDS TO DIE!!!!!!!!.........annoying bitch.....
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IWANNASEEWHATHAPPENS!!!! please, i've waited for so long to read this chapter, my cravings won't allow me to wait any longer for another (aka i might commit sepukku if my cravings aren't satisfied...)
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very unbelievable.Not erotic.Childish use of the language.I guess the whole point of this is beyond me.No one is in character.????
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor naruto *cries* how dare itachi touch what isn't his
oh well still great chapter
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE NOW
oh well still great chapter
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