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by Saro

person blisblop
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is wild,just wild but where are you!wimper whine....snarl
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person blisblop
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm,much better than I remember,thats weird.Glad Naruto is being matue about this.Is sasuke gonna"meet" Kyubi?That would be hot.He can always eat enemies no?
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAH! You updated! I LOVE THIS STORY! I beg of you to update as fast as lightening striking a tree - ok I admit that didn't make a lot of sence - but please update! I am on the edge of my seat and I am drowning in intiscipation!

person Niiro
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im not above begging for an update! just thought i'd say that, but yea! Update please! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!
person HJ11
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please upd8 soon this is awesome!!!
person Tokitoh
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have only one thing to say. Thank you so much for the update. I lost hope... but you updated. You are a very kind and responsible person. XD *gives you a cookie, a car and a new house*

As for the story itself, just keep doing what you're doing. Your language is appropriate, the plot is interesting and the characters are almost perfect. Please write more. And update soon.^___^
person mar
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooh, the plot thickens... so glad you updated cuz this is a great story... haha, cant wait to meat that priest.. haha
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hooray! i'm glad you got over your writer's block. you left us with such an evil cliffie before. well hopefully this trip will shed some more light on sasyke's condition, even though i kinda like him like this. an uke sasuke is a rare treat, and i want naruto to milk it for all it's worth. *snickers* looking foward to your next update. ja!
person Sas-uke
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a tease you are. The need for NaruSasu mansecks is overwhelming as it is. Keep up teh nifty writing.