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by Saro

person Anon^^
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really good. I just want to know what is going on and what is inside Sasuke. I hope you will continue with this story so that we might see the end as I am sure there are many more people waiting to find out whats going on.
person MeLaiya
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this, update soon ok.
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very interesting. A submissive Sasuke is indeed interesting. I was a little confused in the beginning but with the last chapter it started to make sense. All that wonderful Naruto and Sasuke action was to die for. I hope you update as soon as possible!
person Tac
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have no idea why but i LOVE this story! please write more!!! I can just imagine Sasuke with his orange eyes, kya! It's such an awesome idea I want to know what happens! good job please continue ^_^
person Tokitoh
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* I want more. Mooooooooore. *sobs again* You are evil. You stopped updating. Okay. Yeah. I am sure you have something more important to do. And now I am going to take a very cold shower. Then I will beat my head against the wall. Oh, Sasuke, I definitely know how you're feeling... damn, I want more. And you are evil. And I need a shower. WTF.
person Vicki
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! That was just so vivid in my mind. Wow, and all those implications.... For a while I thought Sasuke was a vampire, he isn't is he? Or is it just me? He's having like chakralust, and a little bloodlust and then his dreams were strange, was he killing, sucking or fucking the people? It's a very ethereal type of story. It somehow makes me feel like I'm watching everything through a drug induced haze. I'd love to know what comes next. I like the plot, how it's not cliched, the setting isn't on some type of mission, they realize they love each other yadda yadda yadda. It's something new, and interesting.
person Quichi
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating! Whats up with Sasuke? You will be continuing and solving the mystery, ne? please?
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...More please.
person blisblop
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whooo.That was intense,creepy cool.A good move on Naruto's part in spite of the bite.A least if he keeps this up Sasuke won't starve and its gonna be a waycool read.Cheered me right up.
person Mint
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon -- I absolutely adore your writing, yep.
If you don't, I might go deprived, and die.

Pleaes and thank you.