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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sasuke submissive, huhuuuuu =D
very nice, hope to see the next chapter soon!!
very nice, hope to see the next chapter soon!!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really think this is a great story. I'm not sure if I've reviewed it before or not but I just want you to know, it's really original and I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter. I like how different Sasuke's behavior turned once he started feeding off of Naruto's charka. Really sensous and sexy. Thought his snickering was very un-nerving though lol. I think I would have hauled ass just like Naruto. Can't wait to read more.
~Darkseductress~
~Darkseductress~
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i read the first part of this somewhere a while back and then lost it. now that i've found it again and with so much more, i find it strangely entoxicating and exciting, despite the fact it's really creepy XD
nice job,
phoe-chan
nice job,
phoe-chan
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when it gets to the point where i have to draw fan art for a fan fiction that i am not responisble for creating, it means i need to tell someone to update.
you need to update. SEVERELY.
i am very addicted to this little creation of yours. i can see it so vividly in my mind. my boyfriend doesn't know it, but he is in debt to you for influencing my seemingly random horny tendencies.
you need to update. SEVERELY.
i am very addicted to this little creation of yours. i can see it so vividly in my mind. my boyfriend doesn't know it, but he is in debt to you for influencing my seemingly random horny tendencies.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, the uber-uke Sasuke is very different, but the neediness is sexy
Please keep writing!
LOVE IT!
Kai
Please keep writing!
LOVE IT!
Kai
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o ...wow....interesting.....I can't say much but wow....haha. I can't say much but it was strangely interesting...Sasuke's not himself that's for sure, or is he.....? Please update soon!!!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can't remember if i've reviewed this story already, but it's sooo good. at first i thought it was a vampire fic, but this idea is way better. You're writing is pretty good and i haven't seen many mistakes. I really like the way you're portraying sasuke's inner conflict; you're staying true to his character. Keep up the good work and post a new chapter soon!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am currently flabbergasted and phenomenally impressed--as I have never read a similar kind of fanfiction in concept as this in which I wasn't turned off from the written content.
This isn't just enjoyable, your style, your precise wording, your characterization.
I couldn't stop until the end of this very chapter.
Truely.
You have harnessed me.
This isn't just enjoyable, your style, your precise wording, your characterization.
I couldn't stop until the end of this very chapter.
Truely.
You have harnessed me.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geh!!! What a horribly delicious place to end the chapter!! I was so upset when I found out that this was the last chapter up. This is an awesome story, unique! Keep up the OUTSTANDING writing and can't WAIT for the next update. Ja!
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw hell! I can't believe where you left off! *mutters* I'm not going to be able to sleep because I'll be thinking about what's going to happen next. Darn it! This is an awesome story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks a bunch for writing!