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by Saro

person Kireiko
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Liking the detail. Storyline is progressing more and more. Keep up the good work.

Awaiting the upcoming chapters...
person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fox eyes...and some dream Sasuke had....I would go crazy if I dreamed what he did....fox eyes....hm.....AHHHH great chapter! I need the next chapter! hehe please update when you can! =)
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blink* HOLY SHIT!!! That was AMAZING!!! XP I absolutely LOVED this chapter -- thanks for the quick update, and keep up the good work!!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yum! This get more and more interesting every chapter -- I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! ^___^ Thanks for the update, and keep up the good work!!!
person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Sasuke's a chakra vampire...? kinda? =) please update soon!
person Kireiko
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting so far, Saro-san, I must admit, I am hooked! (I wonder if Sasuke looks hot when he's in that vamp/kyuubi-esque mode ne? *wink* ) Judging by the other's here, I must admit, it seems I'm the only one that likes vamp fics, but this is an interesting turn you've taken. I'll definitely be waiting to read more from you. Keep up the great work. Great storyline so far.


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person 123
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cackles madly* I love it! For a bit I thought "Vampire" but maybe I was wrong. Not that it'd be a bad thing at all, though! Your writing was wonderful, I can't find anything to pick on. Anywho, I'll be looking forward to the next chapters and the hot sex to come with it!!
person TenshiKaitou
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm..okie, so Sasuke was not a vamp. Strange change...very mysterious fic. What-so-ever, fast update! Thanks for this. Gimme more soon!
person jazzy
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And here I thought it was going to be something simple like a vampire story only it's not quite a vamp story and not like anything else I've read. Totaly COOl, please post another chapter soon.
Oh and not nice ending it there!
Thank you.
person sorviball
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh....You got me hooked. After reading the first chapter, I thought it was a vamp fic, so I was a little skeptical about that. Now, though, it's starting to make a little more sense. I like what I've read so far. You do a great job describing the senstations that Sasuke is going through. The way he was behaving really reminded me of an animal. Lemons any time soon? Looking forward to seeing where this goes!