rate_review Reviews

I finally found this story again. Beautiful. Tragic. Wonderfully told. One of the best Itachi-Hinata stories I've read.

I've read all of the chapters, but I didn't get to review until now. First off, I want to say that you have written a great Itachi/Hinata fic that is actually (and definitely!) credible. The Itachi/Hinata fics I've read are totally OOC and some AU with totally no character development. Yours is right on target, with all characters IC. Second, the sex wasn't at all shallow, unlike in many lemony fics. It was artfully written and described with such detail I fell in love, honestly! Third, I am so glad to have found this fic, because there aren't many good Itachi/Hinata fics to go around, and you saved me! ::glomps:: You're wonderful!!

Will you write any more Itachi/Hinata fics? I'd read them!!

very nice and well written.....i mean the plot & stuff....poor hinata & itachi....tragic love story indeed.....and rinji, who only seen his real father once....tats really sad.....

anyways, i enjoyed reading it & great job at it as well....

That was a pretty good story. Depressing ending, but in a sense that was the only way Hinata and Itachi could truly be together in traquality. I pity Rinji and Sasuke. Mostly Rinji because he lost his mother and bilogical father and Sasuke even though he wasn't truly in love with her he stilled cared for her. I'm looking forward into reading more of your work. Keep up the good work!

I loved this story even though it is depressing.

I just want you to know that I cried at the end.

I love your story! Really beautiful... *tears*

If you could, could you post this at ff.net? Perhaps remove some explicit scenes so that it would sastify the M rating? Because I really want to add this story to the ItaHina C2 community, "Tainted". Everyone who enjoys reading ItaHina fics should definitely read this! We should always share and spread the good fics, eh? ;)

Would really appreciate it if you could take up my request. XD

Write more! ^_________^

That was beautifully written and very touching. Its hard finding hinata x itachi stories, but I think you did a great job.

I really love the story and the charactization of the three of them. It would have been interesting to see more insight from other characters such as Neji. But I understand how the story is centered around the three main characters, the rock, paper and scissors. So it all works out. A true piece of art.

Now I'll take the time to answer another reviewers questions: Why Hinata? cause hinata is a Hyuuga. Why not marry to influential clans together? It seems like the logical thing a hokage and council of the village would have to continue the Uchiha bloodline, unlike choosing Sakura from a no name clan, despite her being the Hokage's apprentice there is nothing more to her. Not to mention, Hinata is a deeper character, her background is a lot more flushed out in the series compared to Sakura. She understands the pain of duty and being a part of an influencial clan in Konoha. Sakura is a shallow character who basically has an infatuation with Sasuke and nothing more. And I see no indication of anything better about her, even though her new change in the series, she's still weak. Hinata has a gentle strength, not in raw power but in her personality and caring. Something that I can understand how the two Uchiha brothers would like her.

A sequel would be something I wouldn't mind reading...but it's up to the author. This fic stands great.

No offense, just curious,

Why Hinata? why not Sakura? Since in main Naruto story I think Sakura had something connection with these two brothers more than Hinata. (I could not imagined Hinata marriage with Sasuke cause they have never talked in main story, no need to refer about Itachi.)

May be you should write another fic about Sakura/Sasuke/Itachi.