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Good call.To continue would cheapen it.I am very much looking forward to your next peice.Great work so far.Good luck.

Beautiful. Not a big fan of the pairing but I loved the way you wrote it out. They were very in character. And now Sasuke is free...

I hope you do write an epilogue...

Sobs loudly.Perfect.Don't need to add a word.Kudos,the last chap the most moving,god,you did a great job.Clever concept.Kodos.

Sobs loudly.Perfect.Don't need to add a word.Kudos,the last chap the most moving,god,you did a great job.Clever concept.Kodos.

I am surprised Itachi used Hinata this wayhe ,betrayed her really and so vulgarly and he is homophobic?I am shocked.It was disapointing to hear every crass word that squirmed out of his mouth.....,why is this happening?,his brother is the care taker of his son,Sasuke is the best protection that little boy has because of his little brothers skill.I still can't believe he put Hinata and his son in danger to brag to a man he has no respect for ,who hates him ,before he was sure he could win(and he would know chance plays a big part in fights too!)What of Sasukes revenge on his wife and child.I do not understand at all.The battle itself was studded with tight writing,I am also surprised Sasuke let himself be caught, even a bit with the jutsu he had spent most of his life trying to counter.This chapter leaves me feeling blue and kinda dirty.It feels tired.Sorry I can not explain it well.Thank you for the update.Oh,If Sasuke had that insight then why did,

Very cool plot development...will Naruto make an appearance and cause tension with Sasuke? Cuz that would an an interesting dimension to the story...^_^

Nice. I'm dying for the nxt chapter! Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

OMG! i love the first chapter to this fic! i wish there were more hina/itachi fics out there..theyre so cute together! chapter two wasnt bad either..im also a big sasu/hina fan! anyways, great work! can we have more please?!? ^_^ :-D

I must say I don't like Itachi/Hinata... and I don't like Sasuke/Hinata... but I guess you could actually make me like those pairings XD Especially ItaHina... Your fanfic is beautifully written and really erotic... You describe the lemon parts in a way which I never read anywhere else before.

Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^.

:D You are a very good writer! I enjoyed the first lemon, it was verrrry nicely written. Keep up the awesome work!

And I prefer the spaced out look of chapter one...It makes the chapter seem longer. xD