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wow pretty kewl story. I hope you post again soon. I just have one question...what happend with Naturo? Did i miss somthing in your storie??? Well that's all keep up the good work. :)

.Sasuke and Hinata are on each others side,thats a relief.There is no way Tusundae does not know she wasn't raped,again Sasuke is abused by those who lead Kohona.I feel so badly for Hinata well all of them really.If Itachi had not killed the clan he could have married Hinata,but they would not be the same people so that is a mote point.Very strong with the importance of kindness this chapter was a relief in a way.still lots of questions.Four is more company and more options for comfort,Quads are not a bad idea.

Four is an orgy. Update soon! I love this but I wish they would be honest with each other. I know how they feel.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

i absolutely adore this story of yours...the characters just flow so well into one another, and the huge tangle of emotions between the main characters is just the added spice to make this story such an enjoyable read. I personally like the close-knit set up of chapter two, its a lot easier on the eyes to me than chapter one. Anyway, I hope you update soon, I'll be looking foward to it!

Increadable.Very very ....breathtaking tenderness from Itachi?I died and went to heaven ,this is going to be very interesting,I hope the three plus Sasuke's lover can make this work out.I have always thought of all the women we have been introduced to Hinata would be the best for Sasuke in many ways,except her family would be unberable but I bet they want that Uchiha land and any scrolls ect that are about.So Sasuke knows what is going on right?

I really like this story. It's weird at some points, but the interactions of the characters are good. And their confused and confronted feelings are really realistic, and much more interesting than the two-dimensional patterns we usually read. I liked the scene of the bubbles, even if it's hard to imagine that happening.

For some reason, I liked the feeling of 'sex between friends' that Sasuke and Hinata's lovemaking had.

Why was Itachi so worried about making it look like rape? Was it because he wanted to make her brother feel guilty? Because I don't think it would have ruined their marriage if Hinata had told him she allowed Itachi to fuck her to save Sasuke's life.

wai!
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just cause it's easier to concentrate on the paragraph and move to the next line.

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Very interesting and well written story. I loved reading through it. It wasn't just "dumb sex" and I commend you for that. This may me just being picky, but you might want to focus on syntax and sentence structure in conjunction to your beautiful diction and description. It will make the story flow better and make it easier to follow. But if you already knew that, I'll shut up now. :] And that has got to be be the most formal sounding review I've ever written. x_o

Stories good dude, update soon plz. So Hinata is going to be pregnant with Itachi's kid, right? Man wonder what kind of eye is that kid going to have, I mean sharigan/byugakan combo. Could be like pupil-less with the swirly thing inside, but hey who knows. LOL, serioulsy update soon or I shall smite thee with a waterballoon, yes waterballoon cause I siad so,

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ooohhhhh . . . this was much more interesting than i had thought. at first, i read the summary & was like meh . . . yet another sasuhina, but you managed to defintely suprise me, with an itachihina lemon. how intriguing . . . this is ony of my fav crack pairings. so aparently the next chapter will be sasuhina . . . meh, but i am opefully that you will bring itachi back soon. he doesn't seem the type to simly leave someone he's interested in with his little brother. hopefully, he'll brood about it, wondering what sasuke might be up, get all jealously possesive & quickly return. lol, one can only hope, at least. anyone, hope to see the new chapter soon.