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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
F#@% ME!!!!! That was good. Please continue! >_<
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is excellent. Your writing is beautiful and personally, I would love to see it continued.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmm....very nice indeed. this has the potential to get downright ugly!!! i say let itachi have that chick and let naruto comfort his poor little sasuke....but that's my own particular taste...hahahaha...."emotionally castrated"....*smirk* oh my.... the implications! well i'll be sure to keep an eye out for this one....it's not every day that one comes across tasteful hetero smut! but how did itachi know about Sasuke's wedding if it was a last minute thing though? was he like, stalking him or something? If you continue, that may be something you will want to consider explaining... and is sasuke still weak even after being with orochimaru all that time? or did akatsuki jump him? oh well, great smut by the way....hmmm...i think i already said that...keep it up! d(^-^)b
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitely, definitely continue!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I also wonder how far Hinata will go to protect Itachi...we all know how far Itachi would go...it would be an interesting continuation!!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In the interest of a very well written Itachi and Hinata, I put in my votew for more, please. Good het is very hard to find, and this story was nothing short of amazing. I was surprised when I realized it was an ItachiHinata, because honestly, I've never seen that pairing before. But you made it work! Not only did you make it work, but it was very sexy.
And, gasp! Itachi has *feelings*! What a shock. X3 So...yes. More please?
And, gasp! Itachi has *feelings*! What a shock. X3 So...yes. More please?
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It has great potention to be continued... But you are the author... You have the power...
*makes you feel great doesn't it*
A very good story... angsty and yet gentle in nature... I liked it.
*makes you feel great doesn't it*
A very good story... angsty and yet gentle in nature... I liked it.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go on
go on
go on
go on!
go on
go on
go on!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was actually really hot....and I never thought Itachi and Hinata would make a good couple until now. O_O
It would be really cool if yo continued it...just to see Sasuke's and Naruto's reaction, despite the fact that they are in love with each other and they probably care of Hinata like a sister.
It would be really cool if yo continued it...just to see Sasuke's and Naruto's reaction, despite the fact that they are in love with each other and they probably care of Hinata like a sister.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww.. such a good story! .. but why name it scissors, paper, stone? anyways.. if you can make it into an actual story.. that'll be great!