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for Surival Training, Team Work Skills

by WhiteLiger

person Akira
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute! I loved it the whole way though. You should write more stories like this one. Keep up the good work!! ^-^

~Akira~
person Billy
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it so much.
You need to wright more and more.
Love ya!
^_________________~ - Billy
person Mint
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should... check your grammar... and spelling, definitely.
Secondly -- don't label it NaruxSasu if it's gonna be Sasuke fucking Naruto up the arse, please.
person Ly
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
moooore! >.<
person Arryelle
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute but my question is this is a Rated R fic I mean you didn't have them kiss yet like passionatly at all and no lemon or even citrus are you going to have any

Arry
person Akira
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O...my...god...YES!!!!! O-yes!!! Write more I love it! Sasuke needs to admit and...'show' his feelings! But o-god spilling it to Sakura thats great! I havn't seen that one yet! Please write more!I love your work!!!

~Akira~
person xxdedxx
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD Very interesting, I eagerly await more. ^.^
person vampchic
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Selfesh bastard that Sasuke is being. He is really going to hurt Naruto! Doesn't he understand that the poor boy has no one really? I hope things start to get better and that Sasuke realizes just what an idiot he is being. Update soon, cant wait for the next chappy!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Note to self: Sasuke is a jerk, and Naruto's mouth isn't connected to his brain. Hmmm.......why does that sound familiar? ^___~ I can't wait to find out what happens -- keep up the good work!!!
person Chuche
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww so damn cute and sweet!!!!!! omg I love this story!! I need to read more!! Please update soon!! I really need to read more chapters!! The idea of write about them in the forest ALONE is great!! Love it!!