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for Surival Training, Team Work Skills

by WhiteLiger

person sizzle
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice, very nice, thanks for answering about the angst, i still really enjoy the direction your story is headed, lol. the slight references to naru actually having unawknowledged intelligence was nice to see as well as the fact that he could build the shelter. he's not completely stupid (it made me think that he had faced the wrath of the villagers before and had run to the woods either to get away or just for peace) (well...even though it could be that he's just smart and knows how to sew cuz he lives alone, lol) anyway it's great that you find time during class...hey, it happens, lol
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I just had to add my own review in here so I might be able to talk a little bit to you guys.
That was a really fast update because of the good reaction I am happy to see my fic has had interest taken in it. If you're a Naruto fan you will probably find tons more where this one came from in later days.

Regardless. Can you all try to be constructive? I've gotten one really good one before.
Hehe, I love how you all ask me who is touching him. *does dance* I won't tell *(sticks out tongue)

I am so glad you are all enjoy so much. *bows*
I will try and get another update up as soon as I figure out what is touching Naruto *sticks out tongue* Haha, kidding I do know. Of course.

Later Chapters,
White Liger
person Baka_Tsu
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahah XDDD A CHIPMUNK. I CANT BELIEVE IT XD That was awesome haha, you gotta update as soon as possible XD <3
person -
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i like it. some cliches but well blended. fast updates are always a major plus. thumbs up man
person Yurikai Kurosaki
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WWWWHHHAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!! A CHIPMUNK AND AN EVIL ONE NO LESS!!!!LOOOLL...Seriously, i thought for sure it was a snake or something..guess i was wrong was i?héhé...DAMN! i think i was out of breath for like 5 minutes laughing like that..Well, who would of thought Naruto was scared of chipmunks...
Can't wait to know why....
Oh and HEY!!! Poor Sasuke!!!One sided love is too sad...Hope Naruto is gonna wake up soon!^___^

These days i've been trying to write my own fic and seriously...I SUCK!!! I mean, i'm full of good ideas (i think) but i just can't put them on paper...And would you believe it if i told you that i want to be a mangaka!LOL (I CAN DRAW tough...) Anyway, all this to say that i really admire your work..you're really AMAZING! YOU FIC WRTIERS REALLY MAKE MY DAY!!SO KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!
See ya
person GS*
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay u updated! woohoo. hehe they had their 2nd kiss. hehehe. but the thing that confused me was when they were fighting. wasnt sasuke behind naruto to kick him in the spine. but then naruto fell foward on to sasuke. but wasnt sasuke behind naruto? lol. yea that kinda confused me. lol. XP. well i still loved it. *sigh* their gonna fall in love soon. n_n
person sizzle
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story so far, very comedy centric, will you be adding any angst? it doesn't seem like it, but i was just wondering. i was wondering if they would find out about susu's past and the kyuubi. but very good story, it's really fun to read, lol.
person Heather
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...this could get interesting. i'm looking forward to reading more.
person Baka_Tsu
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha xD That was AWESOME. but wtf is touching him then?!?!?! XD
person Tsugath
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, that's funny! Can't wait to see who was grabbing Naruto!