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for Never Truly Been

by Saro

person Me
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This doesn't seem to be second person, if it was the 'me's would have been 'him's, instean you made it 1st person. I'm sure someone's told you this before, so just to be safe, I don't know where to check reviews on this. Or even if you can.
person Shadows_Call
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.o Holy crap. That was awesome. Short, but in a good way. It flowed beautifully, and the imaging was nicely done. <3 I seriously will haunt your other fiction now.
person blisblop
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very,very f'g intence...my skin got hot/tight and I spaced out half way through...really strange haunted feeling I got reading this..what do you put in these things?Maybe its me...I doubt it though.Your stuff has a strong effect on me,I really like.Sorry if this sounds creepy...
person evvy
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, it was very good. i like how you portray sasuke. i much look forward to any uchiha fics you write in the future <3 very, very nice.
person Ru-Shin
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. ^^ I love the way you wrote this.