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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is really cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
-The Update Monster
-The Update Monster
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! Please update soon and make this story a SasuNaru. I DON'T approve of NejiNaru (they (Neji and Naruto) met,like,twice,
Sasuke and Naruto known eachother their WHOLE lives,almost,so WHY do people (morons) like NejiNaru? I can understand GaaNaru (I don't
like that paring either),but NEJINARU?! NOOOOOOOOO! PLEASE (PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE) MAKE THIS SASUNARU! And tortur
Sakura! Ya!
Update soon,please
Don't listen to flamers,they are all lamers!
Sasuke and Naruto known eachother their WHOLE lives,almost,so WHY do people (morons) like NejiNaru? I can understand GaaNaru (I don't
like that paring either),but NEJINARU?! NOOOOOOOOO! PLEASE (PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE) MAKE THIS SASUNARU! And tortur
Sakura! Ya!
Update soon,please
Don't listen to flamers,they are all lamers!
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh... why didn't sasuke looked hurt?
more angst if sasuke was rejected please >.<~
but it's still good :D
keep up! :D
more angst if sasuke was rejected please >.<~
but it's still good :D
keep up! :D
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh... why didn't sasuke looked hurt?
more angst if sasuke was rejected please >.<~
but it's still good :D
keep up! :D
more angst if sasuke was rejected please >.<~
but it's still good :D
keep up! :D
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi Oi! It's gotten so good since I started reading this! I started cracking up when Sasuke was trying to think of things to show his feelings for Naruto. XD I can just picture them in a field of flowers running towards each other in slow motion Sasuke: NARU-CHAN! Naruto: SUKE-CHAN! *cling* >3 Please continue the story, and good luck! *thumbs up*
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
y'd u hafta drive naruto away? ur gonna bring him bak right? anywayz, update please!!^_^
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was good, little confusing thou. Who does Naruto like and what did Sakura want with him. write more and quickly so I can get over my confusion. :D
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THE FUCK DID YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GET THEM BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T______________________________T WRITEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you need a beta, I can beta for you. I beta for a few people already so it might take me a few hours to get it back to you, but I edit things for a living already. don't mind the extra work. I read through a little bit of your stroy and I think it has potential.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! It sucks to see sasuke and naruto on such bad terms!!! sighz if only naruto knew!!!! Keep up the good work1!!!!