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for Private Dancer

by Vermaxen

person moor
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was so hot -- although I kept expecting Naruto & Kakashi to pop up in the scene at the back as they came for Sasuke. XD
person Kioku
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is too sexy.
person Kira-chan
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was sexy. But the end was also very cute. Sasuke is such a naughty, little boy. But that's why I loveth him. Yes. Very muchly.

Anyways. This was great. I guess I already said that. I really like your writing style, and, that being said, I'm off to read more of your work.

Keep it up!<3
person Dark Phoenix
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAI! Sakura becomes Stripperella! *insane laughter* Sasuke seemed pretty togather at the end, less angsty than usual, which is pretty cool for him! Go you! Here's hoping for more!
person Burned.
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should do alternet version of this story. Like if it was Kakashi or Naruto that was there instead of Sasuke.
person Finality
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. Nice. ;D Sasuke sounded very OOC, but I like how you made him tie her to a fscking pole. >9 It was nummy. Good work.
person someone
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! its very erotic and well.... you get the point. :)
person joann
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha nice!
person Anon
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i LOVED it!!! SO MUCH!
person Linh
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really sexy :) the whole thing was fab, excellent job!