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for Private Dancer

by Vermaxen

person animevivverz
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really good.
person ayasi
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn nice lemon. heh, to do it at a pole, quite erotic, i think. absolutely great. especially since there aren't many sasusaku out there. please write more sasusaku lemons ^^
person Chelsey
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this awhile ago but forgot to review. SORRY! But please do accept this review as an apoligy. I loved it! I was quite a bit surprised with Sasuke out in the audience, but it was pretty cool! Please keep on writing awsome fictions! Take a read of mine if you get the chance.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Lyraelin
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Wow! Because SasuSaku is my all-time favorite pairing, I was delighted to see this - especially since YOU were writing it, because then I knew it had to be awesome. Was I ever right!
person crystal_gaze
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Niice! *thumbs up* I hope there will be more straight fics. Not that I'm against yaoi or anything, I'm just getting tired and bored of seeing so many sasunarus. No offense ppl.
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So awesome! X3 Sakura would make a very cute stripper, I think. Maybe it's just me, but I found this one both cute and amusing, much love! I'll miss your stuff, since they're always such fun reads, and I'll try to crank out as many fandoodles as I can before you go. Loves~!
person swtluck
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very naughty~ but its good... pure smut. a little short but i did enjoy it!
person Rookie
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For some reason, I had a feeling that "Kin" wasn't going to be the one in there... I mean, you did say that it was a SasuSaku... LOL
ANyways, good job setting up the suspense and such!
YOU BETTER WRITE ANOTHER SASUSAKU (or NEJISAKU, CUZ I LOVE THEM TOO)!!!
person Cuito
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the ending. Just absolutely funny and cute. ^_^

Hope to see more from you.
person allyluv17
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice smut!!! i love it!!! please write more. your writing style is excellent.