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I'm hooked! o_______o *runs to read next chapter*

I love the last two lines. <3 <3 This is my new favorite story. I love that it's in Sasuke's POV, which somehow makes everything that much more interesting.

Gawd, it's been a while since i've read something half decent on aff.net

The story's good so far, though it's still a little rough around the edges. Some of the characters just felt a little too formal for me to believe that they're real. There was the odd grammar mistake here and there (maybe running thru grammar check in M$ word?

look forward to more.

thank you for writing.

Fuc*ing awesome, that's all I can say. I REALLY like this one and have to give you pats on the back for your originality! I like Naruto as the hot new guy here, just felt a little put off on how Sakura and Ino just suddenly started acting so mean. I understand trying to keep with the whole outcast thing, but since this fic is so original from the start, I was hoping that you would consider keeping Naruto as a hot mysterious guy no one knows much about but is interested in (especially if everyone finds out he is the heir to the Hyuggan ?spelling? thrown, but not how). Anyway, just my thoughts. Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more.

Very, very interesting! I can't say I'm a big fan of the Naru/Hina pairing, but...I suppose I'll just have to see how it all goes! The lime that you started off with, I must say, I'm curious to see how you will write a lemon... *fangirl squeal*
I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings!
P.S. Is it just me, or does Naruto seem to know more then he's letting on?

You *are* going to add another chapter soon... ::dies::

I love it. Though, I can't say I am a fan of NaruHina, I don't detest it either. That girl is too innocent for her own good. That aside, hm, interesting. So, the um lol the uhmmm the scene at the top, it made me think that Naruto was gonna betray Sasuke or something, or that Sasuke didn't know that uhm he was uhm doing that lol with a guy namely Naruto. Well anyway, this is interesting for sure. I hope you update your chapters soon; I don't want to get my hopes up high yet,..A lot of writers write stories like these with similar characters and end up abandoning the fic. I hope you're not one of them.

awwwwwwwww >o< poor Sasuke~~!! write more write more!

Poor Sasuke. Now he has another reason to hate the Hyuugas. keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.

oooh...i feel the electricity buzzing around sasuke and naruto. (those two are always so hot together!) i'm really excited to see where you'll be taking this story. it's full of potential, what with the conflict that you know is brewing between sasuke, naruto, and hinata. i hope you update regularly because i can't wait to read more of this! later!