rate_review Reviews

Hmmm...intresting story...i like it so far^^ Uppdate soon!! XD

i salute you for having a lime... no, lemon... okay, type-of-citrus scene right off the bat. no misplaced modesty here... me likes!

over all, very well written, and manages to introduce a budding love triangle and interesting take on characters all in one chapter. two thumbs up! although OOC-ness seems prevalent, you did mention it at the beginning, and so far it fits the fic well. i'd like to see the animosity between sasuke and neji expanded, maybe a look-see to what exactly ruffled their collective feathers...

i'm looking forward to reading more of this fic.

wow. This story is so twisted. I love it already. I'm not sure if you meant the intro part to be a dream sequence or a time jump or maybe you meant it to be abiguous but I liked that you set up the idea of them being together in our heads before they meet. I also liked Itachi telling sasuke that they were going to meet hinata's fiance because you just knew it was naruto and that made all sasuke's love at true sight comments all the more tragic. Can't wait to see more!

Wow~ karma huh? Very intriguing! Poor sasuke, but ihave confidence in his abilities.....

Must see what happens next, keep writing! @_@